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Array ( [sid] => 40735 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => We could all use a fresh beginning. [time] => 2004-03-28 23:33:14 [hometext] => Actual letter I wrote to someone I doubt I'll ever know [bodytext] => Dear Anonymous,
Life is one boggling question wrapped around billions of others. Not a bird nor cat or any other animal for that matter has the same emotions or thoughts as us. They will never feel rejection...and yet they will never feel what it is like to love. Their lives are so routine and scheduled. In some ways, I feel superior to being what I am...and in some ways...I wish I could be that bird soaring through the sky or the cat keeping watch for an appropriate time to catch it's prey. But, of course, that's a completely different story....

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We could all use a fresh beginning.

Contributed by Atomic_ on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 11:33:14 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Dear Anonymous,
Life is one boggling question wrapped around billions of others. Not a bird nor cat or any other animal for that matter has the same emotions or thoughts as us. They will never feel rejection...and yet they will never feel what it is like to love. Their lives are so routine and scheduled. In some ways, I feel superior to being what I am...and in some ways...I wish I could be that bird soaring through the sky or the cat keeping watch for an appropriate time to catch it's prey. But, of course, that's a completely different story....

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Re: We could all use a fresh beginning. (User Rating: 1 )
by Bro on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 11:41:14 PM AEST
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Hey Kass

i really like it...
and plez feel free to comment my poetry... even though it sucks ass out the wazzou
lol
well yes... i'll b checkin in on ya a bunches

well bye for now

Re: We could all use a fresh beginning. (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 12:28:03 AM AEST
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I've written something along these lines in my journal too...I can so relate to what you're saying. Great write, short but very meaningful.

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