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Array ( [sid] => 40728 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Leech of Tears [time] => 2004-03-28 23:21:55 [hometext] => well this is my first poem that i created some sort of rhyme scheme for, but i guess im pretty happy with it. im my own worst enemy when it comes to this stuff though so jsut enjoy [bodytext] => Whisper in my canopy through the orchestra of hate
From the birds of rusting ecstacy
Comes the bleeding dust of fate
Yell out my name
In hopes he will come
Yell out a sign
In hope of the midnight sun
I'm listening for a motive that'll keep me silent
I'm waiting for demise to hush my screams
I'm hunting for bereavement of my luncay's violence
I'm suffering for my infliction of awful dreams

Ghost of demise
Please inhale me
Ghost of my cries
Please swallow me
Into the night I'll go
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A Leech of Tears

Contributed by funkdoob on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 11:21:55 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Whisper in my canopy through the orchestra of hate
From the birds of rusting ecstacy
Comes the bleeding dust of fate
Yell out my name
In hopes he will come
Yell out a sign
In hope of the midnight sun
I'm listening for a motive that'll keep me silent
I'm waiting for demise to hush my screams
I'm hunting for bereavement of my luncay's violence
I'm suffering for my infliction of awful dreams

Ghost of demise
Please inhale me
Ghost of my cries
Please swallow me
Into the night I'll go
Sleep, sleep, sleep

Copyright © funkdoob ... [ 2004-03-28 23:21:55]
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Re: A Leech of Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 11:33:27 PM AEST
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This is really cool... keep up the good work!

Re: A Leech of Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Yodo on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 12:40:42 AM AEST
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I think you used a lot of powerful words and images to convey a sense of darkness. I think you succeded as well. I have to be honest and tell you it didn't make much sense to me, but I still think it sounded cool.
You did a good job, and I enjoyed reading it. I really liked the flow and the images in the first few lines.

Re: A Leech of Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:01:53 AM AEST
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"Whisper in my canopy through the orchestra of hate". Wow. I love that line. Good choice of words, you really managed to paint a powerful picture of darkness. Well done.

Re: A Leech of Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 11:02:04 PM AEST
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i really like this....awesome write

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

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