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Array ( [sid] => 40689 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => left [time] => 2004-03-28 19:47:36 [hometext] => Remember this is a 4 year old. This is a story of a true nightmare. [bodytext] => The sound of my small hand hitting your unshaven face.
your scream of shock as I jump off your disgusting lap.
running, running as fast as I could.
hiding under the sink.
silent as can be.
listening to you untie the strings that bound the chairs around the couch.
you said it was for protection.
it felt like a cage to some one my size.
you scream as you throw my tiny blankets about.
you walking throughout the house trying to coax me out of my hiding place.
the door opens I hear you slam your head.
grandmas voice.
I ran out and told what you did.
you denied it all.
grandma saw the place torn apart.
we left.
left for good!!! [comments] => 7 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 32 [informant] => moon_light [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

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Contributed by moon_light on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 07:47:36 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The sound of my small hand hitting your unshaven face.
your scream of shock as I jump off your disgusting lap.
running, running as fast as I could.
hiding under the sink.
silent as can be.
listening to you untie the strings that bound the chairs around the couch.
you said it was for protection.
it felt like a cage to some one my size.
you scream as you throw my tiny blankets about.
you walking throughout the house trying to coax me out of my hiding place.
the door opens I hear you slam your head.
grandmas voice.
I ran out and told what you did.
you denied it all.
grandma saw the place torn apart.
we left.
left for good!!!

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Re: left (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 08:51:36 PM AEST
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OUCH!! This really touched me... Great write... So very sad...
Warm welcome to YPDC....
Jenni

Re: left (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 09:51:38 PM AEST
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I agree with Jenni this was heartbreakingly sad. No child should have to suffer thru a nightmare like that. Oh and welcome to YPDC... Kie

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by thumper on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 11:30:08 PM AEST
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I really liked this one. Good read, and very sad situation! Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

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Ummmm......
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Re: left (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:28:30 AM AEST
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hey nice poem read my newest one ok well g2g bye bye

DEMON

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by Baby_Grl on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:58:07 PM AEST
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This was a good scary one. Really touched and sounds something like the same night mare when I was little. Very bad for a little one. Good write Jen.
Baby_Grl

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by jenjam on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 01:24:48 AM AEST
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this breaks my heart!! i can relate to youre feelings!! im glad u have turned into such a beutiful talented young lady i am proud of u!!!!!!!

Re: left (User Rating: 1 )
by pickle on Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 11:45:53 PM AEST
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hay its amanda... i like it im sry for what happened... i know the feeling... but i WAS raped.... im always here if you want to talk.... love you always...
pickle

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