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Array ( [sid] => 40658 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Emotion of loving u [time] => 2004-03-28 15:05:32 [hometext] => Just something about u that gets me thinking sometimes [bodytext] => People use to say,
I wasen't beautiful,
And my soul,
Would unfold,
Then turn into pieces,
But I was seeking,
For the love,
Of,
You

People use to,
Laugh at things I do,
But when I found u,
I looked at u,
And knew when I looked into your eyes,
You made me realize,
That there are people out there who love me,
And that made me see,
That I am somebody

I use to believe,
That I couldn't achieve,
Nothing in life,
But by,
Your words in speech,
You comfort me,
And when it rains,
I put one hand on the window pane,
And cry for u

I use to cry,
But no one was there to wipe my eyes,
Was up all night,
And I begin to write,
Beautiful poetry,
Which reminded u of me,
I just wan't to reach,
Destiny,
Once more

I need,
To be able to breathe,
Tired of people judging me,
Over simple things,
The faith within me,
Is still there,
Just need to see,
If u care,
About me

I need,
Somebody,
To take away the tears,
Help me overcome fears,
And make me be,
All that I need to be,
I heard a beautiful melody,
That touched me

Come rescue me,
From this thing,
That won't go away,
And it still remains,
Inside of me,
Let me be,
I need u,
So I can hold u,
Forever

Trapped inside,
In my mind,
I hear the voices within,
It's like a sin,
Where is your love,
When I need it,
What am I thinking of,
I can't go through this,
Without my baby

Where are u,
What do I need to do,
Cause I'm scared,
Your out there,
But where?,
I don't wan't to fuss,
Just need u to touch,
Me again

I was listening to some jazz today,
And it made me think,
Of all the things I remember,
About the old me,
I was changing,
For everyone again,
Just to fit in,
But is this the end,
Of what has happened

What does all of this have to do with loving you,
I guess it reminds me of things,
I have to erase,
Out of my mind,
And I got to stop wasting time,
My life is suppose to be with u,
So come help me come close to u,
Now I know what I was going through,
It was the emotion of loving u [comments] => 3 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 48 [informant] => luckycharm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Emotion of loving u

Contributed by luckycharm on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:05:32 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



People use to say,
I wasen't beautiful,
And my soul,
Would unfold,
Then turn into pieces,
But I was seeking,
For the love,
Of,
You

People use to,
Laugh at things I do,
But when I found u,
I looked at u,
And knew when I looked into your eyes,
You made me realize,
That there are people out there who love me,
And that made me see,
That I am somebody

I use to believe,
That I couldn't achieve,
Nothing in life,
But by,
Your words in speech,
You comfort me,
And when it rains,
I put one hand on the window pane,
And cry for u

I use to cry,
But no one was there to wipe my eyes,
Was up all night,
And I begin to write,
Beautiful poetry,
Which reminded u of me,
I just wan't to reach,
Destiny,
Once more

I need,
To be able to breathe,
Tired of people judging me,
Over simple things,
The faith within me,
Is still there,
Just need to see,
If u care,
About me

I need,
Somebody,
To take away the tears,
Help me overcome fears,
And make me be,
All that I need to be,
I heard a beautiful melody,
That touched me

Come rescue me,
From this thing,
That won't go away,
And it still remains,
Inside of me,
Let me be,
I need u,
So I can hold u,
Forever

Trapped inside,
In my mind,
I hear the voices within,
It's like a sin,
Where is your love,
When I need it,
What am I thinking of,
I can't go through this,
Without my baby

Where are u,
What do I need to do,
Cause I'm scared,
Your out there,
But where?,
I don't wan't to fuss,
Just need u to touch,
Me again

I was listening to some jazz today,
And it made me think,
Of all the things I remember,
About the old me,
I was changing,
For everyone again,
Just to fit in,
But is this the end,
Of what has happened

What does all of this have to do with loving you,
I guess it reminds me of things,
I have to erase,
Out of my mind,
And I got to stop wasting time,
My life is suppose to be with u,
So come help me come close to u,
Now I know what I was going through,
It was the emotion of loving u




Copyright © luckycharm ... [ 2004-03-28 15:05:32]
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Re: Emotion of loving u (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:37:39 PM AEST
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WoW Amazing Write Loved It..
Keep Up The Great Work....
,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,


Re: Emotion of loving u (User Rating: 1 )
by Chilibear on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:42:06 PM AEST
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Wow, Luckycharm.... That was really good. I know how you feel, and this poem really touched me! Keep up the good work


Re: Emotion of loving u (User Rating: 1 )
by moon_light on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 08:11:52 PM AEST
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this poem remindes me of how i feal aout a cloose friend. if its true show this to them before its to late.
grate work.
love
moon light




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