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Array ( [sid] => 40647 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~*~Im Fine~*~ [time] => 2004-03-28 13:45:17 [hometext] => this is dedicated to Kenneth Johnson [bodytext] => I can feel my heart breaking
its crumbiling slowly
Im fine untill i go home
home is were im all alone
were i need you the most
I want you beside me
to tell me ill be alright
to dry my tears and make me laph
Im fine untill someone says your name
because its then i remember
the way you talked
all the way down to the way you walked
Im fine untill someone hugs me
because its then i remember your arms around me
i can feel your skin aginst mine
and im wishing that it was you huging me
Im fine untill someone looks at me
because its then i can see your face
the way your eyes would smile when you looked at me
the way that when you smiled you would look the other way
Im fine untill i go to sleep
because its then i can see our skin meeting
its then i can feel your lips aginst mine
its then i can hear your voice
telling me that you love me
its then i can feel your arms around me
its then i feel lilke you still wont me
Im fine untill i wake up
because i wake up crying
knowing that all that was a dream
knowing that your with her and not me
knowing that i love you more than life its self
knowing that i have to live another day with out you
knowing that someone will say your name, that someone will hug me, that someone will look at me
knowing that every thang reminds me of you
so if you dont know it already
day or night im never fine
im always thinking of you
day or night im never fine
all thanks to you.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 22 [informant] => luckymacie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
~*~Im Fine~*~

Contributed by luckymacie on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:45:17 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I can feel my heart breaking
its crumbiling slowly
Im fine untill i go home
home is were im all alone
were i need you the most
I want you beside me
to tell me ill be alright
to dry my tears and make me laph
Im fine untill someone says your name
because its then i remember
the way you talked
all the way down to the way you walked
Im fine untill someone hugs me
because its then i remember your arms around me
i can feel your skin aginst mine
and im wishing that it was you huging me
Im fine untill someone looks at me
because its then i can see your face
the way your eyes would smile when you looked at me
the way that when you smiled you would look the other way
Im fine untill i go to sleep
because its then i can see our skin meeting
its then i can feel your lips aginst mine
its then i can hear your voice
telling me that you love me
its then i can feel your arms around me
its then i feel lilke you still wont me
Im fine untill i wake up
because i wake up crying
knowing that all that was a dream
knowing that your with her and not me
knowing that i love you more than life its self
knowing that i have to live another day with out you
knowing that someone will say your name, that someone will hug me, that someone will look at me
knowing that every thang reminds me of you
so if you dont know it already
day or night im never fine
im always thinking of you
day or night im never fine
all thanks to you.




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Re: ~*~Im Fine~*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 02:15:08 PM AEST
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Oh what a sad poem!!!! I'm so sorry for you!! Its really a teary one! Very well written!! Keep it up! Best wishes!
Anne :D


Re: ~*~Im Fine~*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by luckycharm on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 02:30:29 PM AEST
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This is your friend Pamela. I like this poem so much.
Keep up the good work and I hope to see more of
your poems.-luckycharm.


Re: ~*~Im Fine~*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:30:24 PM AEST
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I really like this one from all the others..
you added that extra pazas ... good job hun-e
~neglected1~


Re: ~*~Im Fine~*~ (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:05:42 AM AEST
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I don't know how to rate it but I think it's BEAUTIFUL. I've felt like that about a guy that I never got to get close with...atleast you actually got Kenneth in your arms and got to kiss him, atleast you had that experience and got to be with him.




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