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Array ( [sid] => 40634 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Demons within Us [time] => 2004-03-28 12:34:26 [hometext] => yeah this sounds crazy.... :) [bodytext] => My thoughts do always haunt me because theyre filled with pain
My vision often taunts me by showing me no gain
The voices are uncertain, they're playing games with me

Afraid to sleep at night? Yes, you're talking about me
Everyday day is but struggle
With what? For its unseen

Theres certain things around us
Yes I know that sounds obseen

The demons bring us pleasure then throw us on our face
The angels come to carry us to another place

Dont ask me how I know this
Dont ask me what I see
For everythings uncertain
and it don't depend on me [comments] => 4 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 11 [informant] => JennyFruFru [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

Demons within Us

Contributed by JennyFruFru on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:34:26 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

My thoughts do always haunt me because theyre filled with pain
My vision often taunts me by showing me no gain
The voices are uncertain, they're playing games with me

Afraid to sleep at night? Yes, you're talking about me
Everyday day is but struggle
With what? For its unseen

Theres certain things around us
Yes I know that sounds obseen

The demons bring us pleasure then throw us on our face
The angels come to carry us to another place

Dont ask me how I know this
Dont ask me what I see
For everythings uncertain
and it don't depend on me

Copyright © JennyFruFru ... [ 2004-03-28 12:34:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Demons within Us (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:15:10 PM AEST
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very darkly written. this is really good. i feel where you are on the last 4 lines of this. it's weird, because it crosses over with me.

Re: Demons within Us (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:30:44 PM AEST
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i agree....very dark and gives an ominous feeling

Re: Demons within Us (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:47:26 AM AEST
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INTRESTING & TRUE! YOU KNOW WHY BUT NOT HOW!!
LOL-DAN!!!

Re: Demons within Us (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 05:05:23 AM AEST
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Maybe it does sound crazy... but that's OK. Poets are supposed to be slightly insane. And, hey, what would the world be wthout wierd people?
Well written. I don't know if I got the whole thing, but I like it.
Take care.
David

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