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Array ( [sid] => 40616 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Predator [time] => 2004-03-28 09:56:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => you walk in the night
gracious your figure I watch
just out of your sight
your skin so smooth begging my touch

you know something is wrong
what though, you don't know yet
the unrest you radiate is very strong
soon you will be fear stricken mad

looking in the night for the hunter
your weak eyes will surely make you fail
im moving in the dark like a black panther
if I had one - with anticipation twitched my tail

destiny picked you, made you take this way
I for sure will not reject its gift
would you only work at day
and not at graveyard shift

Once I take your life
by your beauty my heart will break
still my predatory side will win this strife
I have no choice to make

I am the hunter you are my prey
you will die and I will feed
there is not much left to say
the only reason you are there is to satisfy my need

with a swift move I break your neck
my heart is cold my soul not warm
to show mercy in the savage act
is all what is left of human charm

mercy is rare the horrors are plenty
I do not have to see this grimace any more
for to our kind all mirrors are empty
still I am haunted by all the gore

they say our life lasts an eternity
I know it better and let here the truth be told
we die when we are turned in what we are to be
and most walk out into the sun before turning old

I wished I would not feel at all, would not be as sad
we are not only hunters, we are also victim
I do have feelings, but all what's left feels so bad
and I know eventually I like all the others will give in

I hope it will be soon for your sake
and I hope I will be gone
before too many lifes I take
before by incident I create another one! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 68 [informant] => avis_nigra [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fictional )
The Predator

Contributed by avis_nigra on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 09:56:51 AM in AEST
Topic: fictional



you walk in the night
gracious your figure I watch
just out of your sight
your skin so smooth begging my touch

you know something is wrong
what though, you don't know yet
the unrest you radiate is very strong
soon you will be fear stricken mad

looking in the night for the hunter
your weak eyes will surely make you fail
im moving in the dark like a black panther
if I had one - with anticipation twitched my tail

destiny picked you, made you take this way
I for sure will not reject its gift
would you only work at day
and not at graveyard shift

Once I take your life
by your beauty my heart will break
still my predatory side will win this strife
I have no choice to make

I am the hunter you are my prey
you will die and I will feed
there is not much left to say
the only reason you are there is to satisfy my need

with a swift move I break your neck
my heart is cold my soul not warm
to show mercy in the savage act
is all what is left of human charm

mercy is rare the horrors are plenty
I do not have to see this grimace any more
for to our kind all mirrors are empty
still I am haunted by all the gore

they say our life lasts an eternity
I know it better and let here the truth be told
we die when we are turned in what we are to be
and most walk out into the sun before turning old

I wished I would not feel at all, would not be as sad
we are not only hunters, we are also victim
I do have feelings, but all what's left feels so bad
and I know eventually I like all the others will give in

I hope it will be soon for your sake
and I hope I will be gone
before too many lifes I take
before by incident I create another one!




Copyright © avis_nigra ... [ 2004-03-28 09:56:51]
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Re: The Predator (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 10:03:03 AM AEST
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Oh what a great poem! Sound like a vampire story but can be interpreted as other things. Awesome write! Very vivid description!
ANne :D


Re: The Predator (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:27:04 PM AEST
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I hope it will be soon for your sake
and I hope I will be gone
before too many lifes I take
before by incident I create another one!

i loved that line...very very fun to read




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