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Array ( [sid] => 4061 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Jealous Rage [time] => 2002-09-20 06:43:18 [hometext] => I wrote this poem after a friend confessed her love to my boyfriend of 5 years. Things are fine now and we are still together and I am still friends with the girl. It was in the past but I explained perfectly just how I was feeling being away at college while they were both home. [bodytext] => I hate that she is there
The fact that she sees you just isnt' fair.
She gets to see your big blue eyes.
While I am here starting to cry.

The reason for my feelings I can't explain.
All I know is that it causes much pain.
So much heartache I must endure.
I don't know if I can take much more.

We don't yell and we don't fight.
But still I struggle wiht all of my might.
I deal with the grief of jealousy.
Its stupid, for I know I am the only one you see.

It breaks my heart when you say,
"I didn't really talk to her today"
I wish she would vanish into thin air.
At least you can pretend she isn't there.

However I know you are too nice for that.
But its alright for me to feel like I've been hit with a bat.
One day you will see what you have to do.
Until that time I will rely on my trust for you.

I hate that she is there.
I hate that she doesn't see the love we share.
I wish that what others think doesn't matter to me.
Yet still I would like them to see.

Some day it will be just us.
Then maybe I won't make such a fuss.
But for now we have my jealous rage.
It would be much easier if I could keep you in a cage. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 6 [informant] => makx10 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Jealous Rage

Contributed by makx10 on Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 06:43:18 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I hate that she is there
The fact that she sees you just isnt' fair.
She gets to see your big blue eyes.
While I am here starting to cry.

The reason for my feelings I can't explain.
All I know is that it causes much pain.
So much heartache I must endure.
I don't know if I can take much more.

We don't yell and we don't fight.
But still I struggle wiht all of my might.
I deal with the grief of jealousy.
Its stupid, for I know I am the only one you see.

It breaks my heart when you say,
"I didn't really talk to her today"
I wish she would vanish into thin air.
At least you can pretend she isn't there.

However I know you are too nice for that.
But its alright for me to feel like I've been hit with a bat.
One day you will see what you have to do.
Until that time I will rely on my trust for you.

I hate that she is there.
I hate that she doesn't see the love we share.
I wish that what others think doesn't matter to me.
Yet still I would like them to see.

Some day it will be just us.
Then maybe I won't make such a fuss.
But for now we have my jealous rage.
It would be much easier if I could keep you in a cage.




Copyright © makx10 ... [ 2002-09-20 06:43:18]
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Re: Jealous Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 11:00:42 AM AEST
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Jealousy is a crazy thing...sneaks up you when you least expect it..and it's like super glue or something...no matter how hard you try..you just can't seem to let it go. Jealousy is also a natural feeling...shows you care for someone deeply. There are a few people in the world that would use the word jealousy for their actual feelings of 'ownership'. But true jealousy really isn't such a horrible thing. It's what you do about it that matters. If you have trust in a relationship..then you will be just fine. And forget the old ...if you trust me you wouldn't be jealous cuz that's just a bunch of bull...But keep trusting each other..and you'll be ok... :)


Re: Jealous Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by MisterRight on Sunday, 22nd September 2002 @ 03:45:20 PM AEST
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I can relate to this one, from a different standpoint. There are a few people I wish would just vanish. We all feel jealousy, it's just a matter of how you focus it. Use it to further your relationship rather than hurt it.

Great write.

Curtis




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