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In the midst of your nervous breakdown, Sending a violent chill down your spine,
Think about what its going to be like
on the other side,
Slide back around and face front,
You have too much on your plate,
Give me that lazy eyed stare
Before you slip into darkness
for eternity...

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No More Vegitables

Contributed by strange_lindsey on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:31:55 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

You keep sick company-
In the midst of your nervous breakdown, Sending a violent chill down your spine,
Think about what its going to be like
on the other side,
Slide back around and face front,
You have too much on your plate,
Give me that lazy eyed stare
Before you slip into darkness
for eternity...

Copyright © strange_lindsey ... [ 2004-03-28 04:31:55]
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Re: No More Vegitables (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:47:28 AM AEST
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This is so different loved it, keep eating those veggies for insight! i wonder if you can overdose on broccoli? imagine if veg was illegal the fruit and veg man whispering out the corner of his mouth "pssst! wanna buy a quarter of carrots?"
nice one

wildejohnny

Re: No More Vegitables (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:01:00 AM AEST
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yeah what wildejohnny said, lol..... very wierd and darkish write...

Interesting, very interesting.

Re: No More Vegitables (User Rating: 1 )
by srugglingyoungster on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:56:46 AM AEST
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yeah, what they said. But out of my own words, its very cool and wierd. Kepp eating those vegies and writin' poems!

Re: No More Vegitables (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:07:32 AM AEST
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very deep and makes u think... nice work....

Re: No More Vegitables (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 11:45:47 AM AEST
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ive read this poem three times and each time it means more, and something a lill different, truely a thought provoking write, hugs n' love nessa

Re: No More Vegitables (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:22:22 PM AEST
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this is -- well, I love it.!
Keep it up... great improvement from your angryprincess days....

Re: No More Vegitables (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:56:38 AM AEST
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Huh....I guess it takes all kinds when it comes to inspiration? Nice poem by the way, interesting that you came up with this by eating veggies. :)

Re: No More Vegitables (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:15:17 AM AEST
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Awsome write! You described the emotions phenomonally! It's kinda creepy that I happened to read this poem today... I actually experienced this yesterday... in school. Now THAT was an interesting sight to see! lol. Great Job! I look forward to reading more of your poetry!

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