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we let each other down
Let us us give living waters
In luv to sustain.

Lord help us when
luv's broke down.
Bring luv lites so free.
Lord help us turn things around.

Keep us humble
to walk like you
Leaving healing luv
to get us on thru.

Walking among angels
we should never fear
stumbling blocks at times.
Luv's why we're here.

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LORD HELP US!

Contributed by emystar on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:06:32 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

When there's raging pain
we let each other down
Let us us give living waters
In luv to sustain.

Lord help us when
luv's broke down.
Bring luv lites so free.
Lord help us turn things around.

Keep us humble
to walk like you
Leaving healing luv
to get us on thru.

Walking among angels
we should never fear
stumbling blocks at times.
Luv's why we're here.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2004-03-28 04:06:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: LORD HELP US! (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:43:39 AM AEST
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Love is why we're anywhere. Good write.

Re: LORD HELP US! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:51:37 AM AEST
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that last line Luv's why we're here did it for me so true! yet people don't seem to realise it uplifting stuff well done

wildejohnny

Re: LORD HELP US! (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:50:49 AM AEST
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Thats so cute... and true... good work !! :)

Re: LORD HELP US! (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:36:17 AM AEST
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This is the kind of poem I would put on a fridge magnet, to make me feel good everyday!!
You have a talent for description and imagery that leaves me awestruck...dont you ever stop writing!!

Love Dawny x

Re: LORD HELP US! (User Rating: 1 )
by PsychoPrincess on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 10:47:31 AM AEST
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This is a great piece! It is a great way to express how you feel about God. This piece is also very inspirational. Good work!

Re: LORD HELP US! (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 11:22:44 PM AEST
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Wonderful Write...... About The Fathers Love For Us...
For The Sacrifice Of His Son...
I'm Glad To See Someone Appreciate's
God As Much As I Do....
Hugs N' LoVe
,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,

Re: LORD HELP US! (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:47:43 PM AEST
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a great peace what can i say...im always touched by these types of poems you write... i love them...keep them coming ....desire

Re: LORD HELP US! (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 08:17:59 PM AEST
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You are so right emy. This poem touched me. I liked it. *S* Cynthia

Re: LORD HELP US! (User Rating: 1 )
by brookiecookie02 on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:06:54 AM AEST
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i LUV this poem!!!!
love truly is the reason we're here
please keep writing u r very talented
-Brooke

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