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[sid] => 40584
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[aid] => mick
[title] => U DIDN'T CHOOSE
[time] => 2004-03-28 02:45:25
[hometext] => Wrote this for a girl on another site as she was feeling really bad 'cause men used her. After talking with her for awhile I found out she had been sexually molested as a child by many.
[bodytext] =>
Design by: ~Linda's Signatures~
One day she looked in a mirror.
Everything she saw was ugly.
She wanted to live up to others.
You know, one's that judge her.
Searching thru garbage 4 good
inside she doth agonize.
Hey, she didn't choose this fate.
Insides she desparatly cries.
No one sees, her tortured soul.
They can't see scars from incest.
sitting in God's judgement seat.
They call her names-n-everthing else.
U do what you know from
a young, tender, innocent girl.
never point your finger
as someone else ruined her world.
[comments] => 12
[counter] => 269
[topic] => 34
[informant] => emystar
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 15
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => SongLyrics
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U DIDN'T CHOOSE
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emystar
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 02:45:25 AM in AEST
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Design by: ~Linda's Signatures~
One day she looked in a mirror.
Everything she saw was ugly.
She wanted to live up to others.
You know, one's that judge her.
Searching thru garbage 4 good
inside she doth agonize.
Hey, she didn't choose this fate.
Insides she desparatly cries.
No one sees, her tortured soul.
They can't see scars from incest.
sitting in God's judgement seat.
They call her names-n-everthing else.
U do what you know from
a young, tender, innocent girl.
never point your finger
as someone else ruined her world.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-03-28 02:45:25]
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Re: U DIDN'T CHOOSE
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by silent on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:10:24 AM AEST
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Your bloody right there, i have talked to many abuse victims and been there myself in alot of ways, and you know what, no-one sees the full extent of the scars left, in my eyes the emotional scars left from all abuse, especially severe emotional abuse is one of the most misunderstood forms. It is like a ticking timebomb, everyone out there who commits such acts should be made to feel all the torture victims of this go through, many for the rest of their lives. It is like a shadow in your mind, and a deep sadness you can never truly get over. A brilliant insight in my opinion is a writer called Andrew Vachs, a link to one of my favorite articles is http://www.vachss.com/av_dispatches/disp_9408_a.html
Sorry for raving on, but i hate it with a passion.
Well written,
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Re: U DIDN'T CHOOSE
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:29:58 AM AEST
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It Makes Me Sick To Hear Someone Being Molested....They Done Screwed Up That Little Girls Life For Good...Those Scares Will Never Heal..I Had A Cousin That Was Molested Every Since She Was 6 Months Old Til She Was 5 Or 6 ...And To Beat It All Her Daddy Did It ...And Her Mom Knew He Was Doing It All Alone ...She Never Attempted To Do Nothing About It..She Even Had The Blood Stained Panties That Her Little Girl Had On That Last Time She Was Molested She Goes And Washes Them Out And Dries Them Then Puts Em In A Bag And Takes Them With Her After She Finally Broke Down And Took Her Little Girl To The Hospital.Yeah That Was So Stupid Of Her.....Well The Sad Part Is My Cousin Is No Longer With Us Today...As She Got Older She Realized Who Did All That To Her And She Confronted Her Mom And Dad About It....Well Both The Mom And Dad Killed Her.....There Both Serving A Life Time Sentence In The State Prison.....With No Hope Of Ever Getting Out....
I'm Sorry This Just Makes Me Angry To Hear Someome Was Molested.....My Heart Goes Out To All The Little Kids Thats Been Molested With In The Past....I Say A Prayer EveryNight For These Kids Like This And I'll Continue To Say Prayers For Em..As I Know GOD Answers My Prayers Each And EveryOne Of Em....I'll Make For Sure I Say An Extra Prayer For This Girl ToNight.....Sorry But I've Always Said This And I'll Say It Again...It Takes A Stupid Person To Think Such Thoughts .....But It Takes An Even More Insane Person To Carry On With The Thoughts And Molest A Little Girl..A Girls Virginity Is Something That Should Be Givin To Her Husband On There Honeymoon ...Not To Be Taken By Some PERVERTED PHYSCO Who Is Insane.....I THINK THIS IS THE LONGEST COMMENT I'VE MADE SO FAR ON HERE BUT I JUST CAN'T HELP IT THIS MAKES ME SO BAD GRRRRRR...GOD PLEASE FORGIVE ME FOR GETTING SO ANGRY...
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Re: U DIDN'T CHOOSE
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by emystar on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:51:46 AM AEST
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Hey there angel,
Now this is really sad that her own parents did this. Iwas molested by an uncle and eventually he blew his own brains out.
It's good that hte pycho murderers are in prison with no chance of getting out.
Now this makes me weep inside for your cousin. her parents got what they deserve as they'll have to remember what they did the resto f their lives and why they lost their freedom.
Thanks for sharing this.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: U DIDN'T CHOOSE
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:00:36 AM AEST
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| wow... this was amazing... better then that... there are no words, im speechless....you just said in 4 stanzas what ive tried to say in every poem ive ever written my entire life. Thank you |
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Re: U DIDN'T CHOOSE
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:09:53 AM AEST
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Oh what a saddenning poem!! Grrr I hate hearing how much cruelty is in this world but thats the truth! Aw well, Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: U DIDN'T CHOOSE
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by Dawny on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:39:33 AM AEST
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This is so powerful and sad
"noone sees her tortued soul"
I hope this really helps the girl in question, noone deserves to suffer like that.
Beautiful well written emotional poem
Love Dawny x |
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Re: U DIDN'T CHOOSE
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:49:55 AM AEST
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I shudder with horror at hearing all this in poetic form and the horror expressed in a few stanzes. Beyond belief that anybody could do this to a child.
That anybody could exist capable of doin such a thing makes me cry.
Let us pray for these innocent poor little victims of pervertsd.
Thank you emystar for ringing it home and sharing with other
Love
Elizabeth |
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Re: U DIDN'T CHOOSE
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:00:03 PM AEST
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Emy what a wonderful poem for a wonderful girl. No one could ever understand what this does to a girls physic.....when it happened to me I was sure I was free.......but never will I be! Can ruin your life unless you get help!
I loved this write......for all those out there....there is an end to this story....but you must go for help! Real soon, before it's too late!
love you Emy for writing this and I'll bet you really helped her too!
love
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Re: U DIDN'T CHOOSE
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 11:56:07 PM AEST
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| Emy, I'm Sorry But I Can't Seem To Get This Little Girl Out Of My Mind..This Just Burns Me Up Inside To Hear Another Inoccent Child Being Molested.. .....I Didn't Mean To Keep Running My Mouth Like I Did But Girl I Just Can't Help It....I Have A Burden For This Little Girl And Her Family..I Also Have A Burden For The Man Who Did This To Her,I Hope The Lord Will Deal With This Man's Heart Til He Breaks Down And Asks God To Forgive Him Of His Sins...I Pray That God Will Heal The Little Girls Mind And Body ..And God Will Touch The Parents To Forgive The Man Through The Grace Of God....I Know It Will Be Hard To Forgive Someone Like That Who Done That To A Child But With Gods Grace It Is Sufficient..( 2nd Corinthians 12:9 And He Said Unto Me,My Grace Is Sufficient For Thee:For My Strength Is Made Perfect In Weakness ) |
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Re: U DIDN'T CHOOSE
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by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:06:36 PM AEST
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| its sad to think that people can bring you so much pain and torture... it was a nice dedication to that girl... im sure she greatly appreciated it.... :) it probably gave her some faith in mankind..... to know someone is capable of good deeds |
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Re: U DIDN'T CHOOSE
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:38:11 AM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF POETRY! MAYBE SOMEDAY THESE SAME IDIOTS(not men)
WILL GET THEIRS WHEN THEY GO TO JAIL!!
THEN THEY'LL KNOW SOMEWHAT WHAT SHE HAD TO GO THROUGH!!! GOD BLESS HER & YOU FOR WRITING THIS!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!! |
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Re: U DIDN'T CHOOSE
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:09:11 AM AEST
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| Emy, this is so sad. I can't believe something like this happened to an innocent little girl. It's not right. *S* Cynthia |
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