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[sid] => 40579
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => this letter. ..
[time] => 2004-03-28 01:44:54
[hometext] => a letter to the one i love.. . .who doesnt know this much yet.. . .
[bodytext] => this is a letter to my only,
a letter that speaks of love,
a plead for you to hold me,
a question of your touch,
a cry out in the dark,
and silence in the day,
questions of my sanity,
and how long i can pray,
this is a letter of my soul,
a paper cut in my heart,
this is the final letter,
one for us to part,
this is a letter of questions,
and answers for a start,
this is a letter for your eyes only,
one i want you to guard,
this is a letter of confession,
a confession of my sins,
a confession of my love,
and how it has only to begin,
this is a letter of being,
a remembrance of you,
this is a missing link,
answers on how to get through,
this letter really says nothing,
its blank as the night,
but it screams so much,
and brings an odd light,
this is my saying i love you,
in your ears late at night,
this is me stopping for hug,
in the middle of a fight,
this is everything stopping,
in the blink of an eye,
this is over twenty reasons,
that you should never cry,
this is my beliefs,
this is my downs,
this is my smiles,
this is my frowns,
this is my ability,
to kiss you when i want,
this is my chance,
to be extremely blunt,
you are,
my only,
my one,
my moon,
my sun,
my light,
my dark,
my gas,
my spark,
my love,
my lust,
my pain,
my trust,
my feelings,
my touch,
my everything you can be,
and you are the first to know,
that in my eyes,
your everything,
that i need to grow. . ..
in this letter,
i explain how i feel,
please understand,
cause what i say is real. . ..
i wish i could kiss you,
i wish i could hold you at night,
i wish i could hug you,
i wish i could put a fire in your life,
i wish i could be yours,
be everything you need,
but i realize im too young,
and unsure of what,
i really can be. .. .
please understand me. .. .
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[counter] => 261
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[informant] => nate
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this letter. ..
Contributed by
nate
on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:44:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
|
this is a letter to my only,
a letter that speaks of love,
a plead for you to hold me,
a question of your touch,
a cry out in the dark,
and silence in the day,
questions of my sanity,
and how long i can pray,
this is a letter of my soul,
a paper cut in my heart,
this is the final letter,
one for us to part,
this is a letter of questions,
and answers for a start,
this is a letter for your eyes only,
one i want you to guard,
this is a letter of confession,
a confession of my sins,
a confession of my love,
and how it has only to begin,
this is a letter of being,
a remembrance of you,
this is a missing link,
answers on how to get through,
this letter really says nothing,
its blank as the night,
but it screams so much,
and brings an odd light,
this is my saying i love you,
in your ears late at night,
this is me stopping for hug,
in the middle of a fight,
this is everything stopping,
in the blink of an eye,
this is over twenty reasons,
that you should never cry,
this is my beliefs,
this is my downs,
this is my smiles,
this is my frowns,
this is my ability,
to kiss you when i want,
this is my chance,
to be extremely blunt,
you are,
my only,
my one,
my moon,
my sun,
my light,
my dark,
my gas,
my spark,
my love,
my lust,
my pain,
my trust,
my feelings,
my touch,
my everything you can be,
and you are the first to know,
that in my eyes,
your everything,
that i need to grow. . ..
in this letter,
i explain how i feel,
please understand,
cause what i say is real. . ..
i wish i could kiss you,
i wish i could hold you at night,
i wish i could hug you,
i wish i could put a fire in your life,
i wish i could be yours,
be everything you need,
but i realize im too young,
and unsure of what,
i really can be. .. .
please understand me. .. .
Copyright ©
nate
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2004-03-28 01:44:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: this letter. ..
(User Rating: 1 ) by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 02:53:57 AM AEST (User
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Nate...
A nicely written loooonnnnnngggg poem!!! What was it u were saying about how bad ur poems were... they're not bad at all... my friend. Maybe a lil spit and polish here and there... actually they're quite good. u keep writing and so will I...
~Donna~
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Re: this letter. ..
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:12:39 AM AEST (User
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Very good writing. Also it's very creative.
Nice job.
luv, huggs,
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Re: this letter. ..
(User Rating: 1 ) by GrayStar_909 on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:20:28 AM AEST (User
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I really like this poem its really heartfelt which are the best poems. |
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