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Array ( [sid] => 40572 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i need finality [time] => 2004-03-28 00:14:46 [hometext] => I wrote this in about 5 minutes. this is my first submission ever. I am a 15 year old guy. [bodytext] => ever feel like your ignored?
to everyone your just abhorred?
eveyrone plays head games
and they've given you the blame.
ever want to laugh out?
ever need to cry out?
is your soul filled with doubt?
with nothingness?
with emptiness?
which your actions,
they have no consequence?
just that you can't live with out?
oh, i'm not cool,
i'm just a fool,
just another dork that drools.
i need closure, i need finality,
one way to solve that is fatality.
im feeling contorted.
im feeling twisted.
you're all falling away,
you're getting more distant.
i need closure,
i need finality,
i'm stuck in life's box.
can't get out of my cell block.
my life isn't real.
it's just xeroxed.
i'm the worst as can ever be,
i cant fix the problem
you fix it,
get of rid me .,
and end me with finality. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 61 [informant] => ur_in_my_light [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

i need finality

Contributed by ur_in_my_light on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:14:46 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

ever feel like your ignored?
to everyone your just abhorred?
eveyrone plays head games
and they've given you the blame.
ever want to laugh out?
ever need to cry out?
is your soul filled with doubt?
with nothingness?
with emptiness?
which your actions,
they have no consequence?
just that you can't live with out?
oh, i'm not cool,
i'm just a fool,
just another dork that drools.
i need closure, i need finality,
one way to solve that is fatality.
im feeling contorted.
im feeling twisted.
you're all falling away,
you're getting more distant.
i need closure,
i need finality,
i'm stuck in life's box.
can't get out of my cell block.
my life isn't real.
it's just xeroxed.
i'm the worst as can ever be,
i cant fix the problem
you fix it,
get of rid me .,
and end me with finality.

Copyright © ur_in_my_light ... [ 2004-03-28 00:14:46]
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Re: i need finality (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:22:07 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC...this was so sad but written with so much feelings.... If this is truly how you feel, I hope things improve for you soon...
Jenni

Re: i need finality (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:29:49 AM AEST
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wonderful expression of feelings, warm welcome to ypdc, keep writing! hugs n' love nessa

Re: i need finality (User Rating: 1 )
by pinkashes on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:40:39 AM AEST
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it's good, i can tell you were just writing with your heart. keep doing it, keep on going.

Re: i need finality (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:31:45 AM AEST
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Very good writing! I think u found your nick.
Take it easy on yourself, please?
I'm sure there's much good in u.
Keep it up, ( the writing).
Luv, huggs,
emy

Re: i need finality (User Rating: 1 )
by Avis_Nigra on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:07:45 AM AEST
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Very impressive. It will be alright some day.

Re: i need finality (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:12:45 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC... If this is rue u can overcome ur feelings in time... don't be hard on urself... I know I've been there and done that and am probably still doing it lol! U have definitely found ur niche in life keep writing... hope to hear more from u...
~Donna~

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