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Array ( [sid] => 40563 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forgive me if i need you like i do [time] => 2004-03-27 22:45:29 [hometext] => this is for my bf..i haven't given it to him yet..i've been really depressed for a bit and have been a pain so i wrote it for him..i know the title is from a brian adams song^_- [bodytext] => Thank you for holding my dreams,
thank you for catching my tears
and always lending me your shoulder to cry on.
Baby you lisen to me when i lose hope,
you tell me how to always stay strong.
Thank you for being my strength.

I cry for tomorrow when i have nothing to hold
but you remind me that i have everything to live for.
I always try to smile,
i want to be perfect just for you,
if i would make you happy,
i would do anything for you.

I know you wouldn't leave me for someone else,
and i'm sorry if i ever doubted you.
Baby i'm still a child but you still love me
like noone else could.
You stay with me through whatever i do
and it gives me hope.
It means the world to me.

When you touch my body
and when you look deep in my eyes,
i can feel the love i almost forgot.
I dial your number just to hear your voice
before i go to bed.
You give me the sun to follow through out the day,
and the moon to hold when i dream at night.

If i lost you i would die inside,
you give me a life i never knew.
Your my hero in this world,
and just to hold you is the greatest thing,
just to lay beside you and watch you sleep
keeps me alive forever.

Buy me a diamond ring,
or give me a cruise around the world,
but if i don't have you to share them with
they lose all meaning.
No material possesion could ever egual
the feeling of having you in my arms.

Your a little far from me
but your still so close that i can stil feel
your kiss on my cheek.
No matter what anyone says,
i will fight to stay with you,
no matter how far we are apart,
i will always love you and wait
till the day we meet again.

But baby please fight to keep me with you,
don't give up on me for i will stay strong,
i will make you smile.
Baby i love you.
You mean the world to me,
and i will do anything to prove it to you. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 2 [informant] => gery_giggles [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Forgive me if i need you like i do

Contributed by gery_giggles on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:45:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Thank you for holding my dreams,
thank you for catching my tears
and always lending me your shoulder to cry on.
Baby you lisen to me when i lose hope,
you tell me how to always stay strong.
Thank you for being my strength.

I cry for tomorrow when i have nothing to hold
but you remind me that i have everything to live for.
I always try to smile,
i want to be perfect just for you,
if i would make you happy,
i would do anything for you.

I know you wouldn't leave me for someone else,
and i'm sorry if i ever doubted you.
Baby i'm still a child but you still love me
like noone else could.
You stay with me through whatever i do
and it gives me hope.
It means the world to me.

When you touch my body
and when you look deep in my eyes,
i can feel the love i almost forgot.
I dial your number just to hear your voice
before i go to bed.
You give me the sun to follow through out the day,
and the moon to hold when i dream at night.

If i lost you i would die inside,
you give me a life i never knew.
Your my hero in this world,
and just to hold you is the greatest thing,
just to lay beside you and watch you sleep
keeps me alive forever.

Buy me a diamond ring,
or give me a cruise around the world,
but if i don't have you to share them with
they lose all meaning.
No material possesion could ever egual
the feeling of having you in my arms.

Your a little far from me
but your still so close that i can stil feel
your kiss on my cheek.
No matter what anyone says,
i will fight to stay with you,
no matter how far we are apart,
i will always love you and wait
till the day we meet again.

But baby please fight to keep me with you,
don't give up on me for i will stay strong,
i will make you smile.
Baby i love you.
You mean the world to me,
and i will do anything to prove it to you.




Copyright © gery_giggles ... [ 2004-03-27 22:45:29]
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Re: Forgive me if i need you like i do (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:23:05 AM AEST
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Wow!!!!! That is truly a most beautiful poem. I wish somebody felt like that about me, hows it all going? I gather from this its going great. PM me if you like to tell me the latest, if things have settled down from last time we spoke.
Really really good poem, you should be very proud of this, let me know wat your bf thinks.

Ali xx


Re: Forgive me if i need you like i do (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:24:51 AM AEST
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Wow beautiful sentimental poem! I bet your bf will going to be thrilled about it! (if thats the appropriate word) Awesome write filled with a lot of emotion!!
Anne :D


Re: Forgive me if i need you like i do (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:59:08 AM AEST
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A PRETTY POEM! I GUESS YOU REALLY LOVE THIS GUY,IT SHOWS BY WHAT YOU WROTE!!
DAN!!!


Re: Forgive me if i need you like i do (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:17:16 PM AEST
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awww tears of happiness is words that i can use to best describe this... thats so sweet... he will def. enjoy :)


Re: Forgive me if i need you like i do (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:12:31 AM AEST
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awww, such a beautiful loving tribute. you are very lucky to have this love, dont let it go. *hugs* phil xxx


Re: Forgive me if i need you like i do (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 10:40:17 AM AEST
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i know what your going through. this was soooooo sweet, it made my heart melt. so full of love. an amazing write. well done keep it up.
Arden




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