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Array ( [sid] => 40525 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Starlight [time] => 2004-03-27 16:21:36 [hometext] => a wee bit of magick........ [bodytext] => ______________________________

Silver rings on her fingers and toes
A magic woman lives in the wood
Her voice is a song when the wind blows
You’ll not find her even if you look

Deep in the forest she sits by the lake
Her gossamer gown studded with stars
It is the only gift she will take
From dark clouds she gathers her riches

Her cold translucent hands clap
As thunder rattles the heaven’s and earth
Glittering stars fall into her lap
She gathers them up as dew drops

The traveler sees only her light
Beckoning in the distance
As she glides through the night
If you see her, your soul she bewitches

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Starlight

Contributed by merry on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:21:36 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

______________________________

Silver rings on her fingers and toes
A magic woman lives in the wood
Her voice is a song when the wind blows
You’ll not find her even if you look

Deep in the forest she sits by the lake
Her gossamer gown studded with stars
It is the only gift she will take
From dark clouds she gathers her riches

Her cold translucent hands clap
As thunder rattles the heaven’s and earth
Glittering stars fall into her lap
She gathers them up as dew drops

The traveler sees only her light
Beckoning in the distance
As she glides through the night
If you see her, your soul she bewitches

Copyright Â© merry ... [ 2004-03-27 16:21:36]
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Re: Starlight (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:55:37 PM AEST
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Wow great poem!!!!!!! Amazingly written!! really bewitching ;). Very vivid imagery I could picture the scene!
Anne :D

Re: Starlight (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 08:42:43 PM AEST
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I agree it was bewitching, magical and spellbinding. I didn't want it to end. Kie

Re: Starlight (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:30:16 PM AEST
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gaille this is breathtakingly excellent!! i see her there and oooo what a picture heh, your talent really shines in this poem! hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Starlight (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:52:01 PM AEST
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I dunno why but reading your great work makes me think of The Morrigu of Celtic legends.. nice and haunting write..

Re: Starlight (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 11:52:54 PM AEST
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BooooooI saw her plainly in my Mind's eye....and I got scared Mer.......she is somethng else! Haunting, and spooky I'd say. Great Poem......had an erie affect on my soul.
Thanking you for all your nice comments on my poems Mer.
I leave a good on yours!
This was boogymangreat!
love,
consue

Re: Starlight (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 11:40:11 AM AEST
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Magic is the perfect word for this, it cast a spell on me. Reading it with a fever made it even more mysterious and capitivating..lol Damn I love your writing. ((Gaille))

Roses for my daisy
Larry

Re: Starlight (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:39:27 AM AEST
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A modern-day siren? Beautifully written.
Stitch

Re: Starlight (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 04:38:32 AM AEST
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Merry thank you for your kind words about my Viggo poem this one nice i like the wording but i think it needs more

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