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"SPRING'S MAGIC CARPET"

Oh My~~~~~~High my spirits ride.
Upon Spring's magic carpet glide.
Heavenward higher, sighs soar!
Winter's prisoner, 'twas grey I wore.

Spring nudges Mother Earth
Creatures awaken, soon give birth
Bird's mating, playing "touch-tag"
Spring's loving spirit, instincts nag.

Enduring Winter hard, 'twas severe!
Spring's beauty dismiss, disappear.
Lengthy days, sun's rays, soul's embrace.
Ah~~Spring can only bring, splendor's grace

Hearts promising, lifetimes together.
Loving, hoping, brand-new forever.
Creatures tiny, some wee, some smaller.
Flying, jumping, worm's creeping....crawler.

Generous delight. His season's our variety.
An awakening, eagerness' brisk beauty!
Spring's magic carpet ride each year.
Aging advanced, becomes even more dear!

Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
March 26, 2004
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Spring is nature's way
of saying, "Let's Party?"
~Robin Williams~

"Spring Smiles
at You!"

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SPRING'S MAGIC CARPET

Contributed by lovingcritters on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:50:53 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

"SPRING'S MAGIC CARPET"

Oh My~~~~~~High my spirits ride.
Upon Spring's magic carpet glide.
Heavenward higher, sighs soar!
Winter's prisoner, 'twas grey I wore.

Spring nudges Mother Earth
Creatures awaken, soon give birth
Bird's mating, playing "touch-tag"
Spring's loving spirit, instincts nag.

Enduring Winter hard, 'twas severe!
Spring's beauty dismiss, disappear.
Lengthy days, sun's rays, soul's embrace.
Ah~~Spring can only bring, splendor's grace

Hearts promising, lifetimes together.
Loving, hoping, brand-new forever.
Creatures tiny, some wee, some smaller.
Flying, jumping, worm's creeping....crawler.

Generous delight. His season's our variety.
An awakening, eagerness' brisk beauty!
Spring's magic carpet ride each year.
Aging advanced, becomes even more dear!

Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
March 26, 2004
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Spring is nature's way
of saying, "Let's Party?"
~Robin Williams~

"Spring Smiles
at You!"

Copyright © lovingcritters ... [ 2004-03-27 14:50:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: SPRING'S MAGIC CARPET (User Rating: 1 )
by faithmairee on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 03:11:42 PM AEST
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What a beautiful celebration of spring! I loved this and the grapics were perfect for your poem. Spring is my favorite time of year and you did a commendable job of capturing the very essence of the season. You deserve five stars for this one!

faith

Re: SPRING'S MAGIC CARPET (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 03:46:38 PM AEST
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If there is anything more beautiful than spring I haven't found it. Trees and bushes flowering, little baby animals everywhere, insects getting busy and squirrel flying thru trees. This was the perfect poem for spring, you can't help but feel positive when its spring and depression is non existant! Loved this poem ConSue... Kie

Re: SPRING'S MAGIC CARPET (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:24:08 PM AEST
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Yipppeeeee Spring is here - great write - made me feel like running outside to check my garden

hugs
merry

Re: SPRING'S MAGIC CARPET (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:26:13 PM AEST
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Hi Mom,
I'm playing catch up.
Yeah, and female cats get pregnated, ha.
Very good write, Mom.
I was jus out earlier looking at all my tulips and other folwer bushes etc. in bloom. Jus was wishing the blooms didn't fade so fast.
very good write.
luv, huggs,
your brat,
emy
Very good write.

Re: SPRING'S MAGIC CARPET (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:35:22 PM AEST
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sweet sweet sweet!!! hugs n' love ya, nessa

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Re: SPRING'S MAGIC CARPET (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:57:59 PM AEST
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What can I say, as always a very uplifting write. An ode to spring indeed I wonder if I can rent you magic carpet..he he he..

Re: SPRING'S MAGIC CARPET (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 11:27:00 PM AEST
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Critters, this is the nicest spring write I've seen. I loved it. *S* Cynthia

Re: SPRING'S MAGIC CARPET (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:43:41 AM AEST
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you make me remember the good memories......i love you my friend........

Re: SPRING'S MAGIC CARPET (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:46:01 PM AEST
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Consue,
This is EXACTLY the way I feel about spring---especially the part about wearing winter's gray. YUK! I suffer from SAD, and Spring is one of my FAVORITE times of year! Thanks for sharing this.
Stitch

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