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Array ( [sid] => 40513 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ramble [time] => 2004-03-27 13:56:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => With these words I've never been good,
never been able to say what I
should
I go into the empty air tonight
go into the void and hope it'll be all
right
now there's nowhere I'd rather be
than sitting here talking
endlessly
these thoughts and doubts they chase me
waiting to hold me down and make me
see
this is what happens when my mind wanders
when it sits home and sets to
ponder
what you will about us
how you had to break our
trust
in me to see us through
and I'll make it up to
you
say that we can always be friends
but I know that this is the
end. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 25 [informant] => CodyJ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Ramble

Contributed by CodyJ on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:56:50 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

With these words I've never been good,
never been able to say what I
should
I go into the empty air tonight
go into the void and hope it'll be all
right
now there's nowhere I'd rather be
than sitting here talking
endlessly
these thoughts and doubts they chase me
waiting to hold me down and make me
see
this is what happens when my mind wanders
when it sits home and sets to
ponder
what you will about us
how you had to break our
trust
in me to see us through
and I'll make it up to
you
say that we can always be friends
but I know that this is the
end.

Copyright © CodyJ ... [ 2004-03-27 13:56:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Ramble (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:00:27 PM AEST
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for just rambling you created a pretty darn good poem.. i really enjoyed reading this.. i think sometimes everyone sits around and ponders the things in their heads.. you created your thoughts very well.. keep up the good work.

~neglected1~

Re: Ramble (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:28:25 PM AEST
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Amazing Write I Enjoyed Reading It.
Look Forward To Reading More Or Your
Wonderful Poems...
{{{{{{{ Hugs }}}}}}}
,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,

Re: Ramble (User Rating: 1 )
by Mortis-Dark on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:46:20 PM AEST
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Very nice, I sense theres alot of pain and anguish behind it. I hope you write more of your thoughts. I surely would love to read them.

Re: Ramble (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 03:33:31 PM AEST
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I agree this was a very good poem filled with sadness, reflection, longing and ponderings. Makes for awesome poetry, well done. Kie

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