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Array ( [sid] => 40486 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Living With Dreams [time] => 2004-03-27 08:29:45 [hometext] => I'm sorry I post such a lot, this will be my last one.... [bodytext] => Just before midnight
My eyes are wider than ever
I left my sleep behind
To run off with my thoughts
My dreams and fantasies
Thinking of the impossible
Brings a rush of.....
It can't be described
But some how it manages
To take your breath away
Then on your face appears a smile
The excitement of the mind
Opens new doors
That hasn't been discovered
But it has been there before
Dreaming with my eyes open
My realities, my fantasies
Fused together to make
Heaven and Hell
Good and bad
Dead and alive
Am I alive?
Or am I living with dreams? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Stewie_Griffin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Living With Dreams

Contributed by Stewie_Griffin on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 08:29:45 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Just before midnight
My eyes are wider than ever
I left my sleep behind
To run off with my thoughts
My dreams and fantasies
Thinking of the impossible
Brings a rush of.....
It can't be described
But some how it manages
To take your breath away
Then on your face appears a smile
The excitement of the mind
Opens new doors
That hasn't been discovered
But it has been there before
Dreaming with my eyes open
My realities, my fantasies
Fused together to make
Heaven and Hell
Good and bad
Dead and alive
Am I alive?
Or am I living with dreams?

Copyright © Stewie_Griffin ... [ 2004-03-27 08:29:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Living With Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Arius-Inues on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:36:18 AM AEST
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No it aint! Your poems are really good! And I would hate it if you were to stop posting! So please dont.

Re: Living With Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:09:40 AM AEST
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No way, don't stop posting! There's no such thing as posting too much on YPDC. This was a lovely poem, I'm always wondering about the blur between my fantasies and reality. Cool write!

Re: Living With Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:23:44 PM AEST
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you capture the wide awake feelings very well!No you better not be going off and not posting anymore poetry!!
michelle

Re: Living With Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:20:30 PM AEST
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great images:) hugs n' love nessa

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