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Frozen Screams
Contributed by
silent
on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:18:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In darkness i lie, praying for silence
Broken promises yet again
Click, like ice, body and mind become one
Through the darkness shadows appear
Two eyes, like shadowed fire
With one purpose, to destroy the light
Mind screaming frozen screams
Body fighting the immovable mind
Breath so cold, i feel the devils comfort loving me
Digusted and ashamed awashed with the love of being terrifyingly familiar
Don't worry daddy, why can't you see
I won’t tell her, our love is still free.....
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silent
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2004-03-26 22:18:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Frozen Screams
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:24:43 PM AEST (User
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vERY, VERY SAD!
Written well.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Frozen Screams
(User Rating: 1 ) by Soulless on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:32:17 PM AEST (User
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Hauntingly Beautiful. I loved the tragic and dark emotions put into this piece.
Hope you dont mind if I bookmark it.
kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Frozen Screams
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:23:58 PM AEST (User
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I found this troubling and it left me with an uneasy feeling....the mark of a good writer is to be able to bring emotions forth and you did it in this big time.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Frozen Screams
(User Rating: 1 ) by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:44:55 PM AEST (User
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Very Sad But Yet Great Write
Lot Of Emotions Brung Forth In This Poem.
Loved It..
{{{{{{ Hugs }}}}}}
,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,, |
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Re: Frozen Screams
(User Rating: 1 ) by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:01:26 AM AEST (User
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Overwhelming is the first word that comes to mind. It's dark and tragically beautiful at the same time. |
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Re: Frozen Screams
(User Rating: 1 ) by arden on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:16:50 PM AEST (User
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very nice!
very deep dark emotion and so well written. amazing work. loved it.
Arden |
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