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The 3 F's
Contributed by
Arius-Inues
on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:43:34 PM in AEST
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My 3 F’s
Aren’t for motivation,
Not to make me happy,
And not to relive stress,
But they remind me,
Of how no happiness is found,
Within my dark pit,
Many would call a sole,
But in that rare hour,
When happiness is found,
It never stays for long,
For someone always steals that candle,
And the 3 F’s,
That I have carved into my flesh,
Open and bleed,
And I fear they shall never heal,
But shall forever break open,
Those old words will remain immortalized,
My old cuts read,
Forgotten, Forsaken, and Farewell!
Copyright ©
Arius-Inues
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2004-03-26 21:43:34]
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Re: The 3 F's
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by neglected1 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:06:58 PM AEST
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set up very nicely.. and good choices for your three f's.. its the fundamental of life!
keep up the good work
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Re: The 3 F's
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:25:07 PM AEST
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| Great write!!! I liked the images your poem created in my mind. Good job! |
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