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Array ( [sid] => 4043 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Misplaced Trust [time] => 2002-09-19 21:15:40 [hometext] => Nothing cuts me to the core like deception, lies and misplaced trust.
This is not about a man, or a love life, or a lost love, or anything so trivial as that. (I would be sad, upset and possibly distraught over something like that, but NOT THIS ANGRY!) [bodytext] => You've over stepped your bounds

Broken an oath

You've done a great disservice to us both.

I gave you my trust

So sorely misplaced

I realize now, you threw it back in my face.

I gave you the truth

You fed me such lies

That I believed in you, is what I truly despise.

You deceiving me this way

Was your biggest mistake

I will go out of my way to prove you're a fake.

Having solid proof

I will take you down

Your reputation will lay in tatters on the ground.

I was so blind

I just couldn't see

For the rest of my life, this will haunt me.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 6 [informant] => tanna [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Misplaced Trust

Contributed by tanna on Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 09:15:40 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You've over stepped your bounds

Broken an oath

You've done a great disservice to us both.

I gave you my trust

So sorely misplaced

I realize now, you threw it back in my face.

I gave you the truth

You fed me such lies

That I believed in you, is what I truly despise.

You deceiving me this way

Was your biggest mistake

I will go out of my way to prove you're a fake.

Having solid proof

I will take you down

Your reputation will lay in tatters on the ground.

I was so blind

I just couldn't see

For the rest of my life, this will haunt me.

Copyright © tanna ... [ 2002-09-19 21:15:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Misplaced Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 10:40:37 PM AEST
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Nothing hurts worse then the betrayel or someone we love and trust. However..I have often found that cutting all ties with them...even the bad ones...usually gets to them worse then any revenge ever could

Re: Misplaced Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 07:52:50 AM AEST
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very strong angry piece and the anger really leaps of the page

good write

peace be your journey

terry

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