Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 01-June 12:18:57 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 40427 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Reverie [time] => 2004-03-26 21:30:53 [hometext] => I can never help but make my poems into lyrics...... [bodytext] => I drown the words with deceitful thoughts
Numb the pain with imaginary light
Let my fantasy fall in raindrops
Shower down inside me

CHORUS:
Swallowed up in my decietful reverie
Silent screams drift away from me
As I recede beneath my pool of hope
That one day I escape the real world
Where dreams carry me away
Where clouds cast away my hurt
Where these enchantments cannot cheat me
Where they wont harm me

A new set of tears soak my pillow
Thoughts burn through my skin
How I long to be away from slurring words
Catch the drift of my thunderstorm

Chorus

Where dreams carry me away
Where clouds cast away my hurt
Where these enchantments cannot cheat me
Where they wont harm me

My heart glistens on the wonders that betray me
I know my faithful dreams cannot forget me
For I wont let this life distroy me
I choose my dreams to take me
I choose my dreams to keep me
For now it is I they cannot see

CHORUS

They cant harm me
They cant see me
Here I hide
Where they wont harm me
Where they wont see me
Here I stay [comments] => 8 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Soulless [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Reverie

Contributed by Soulless on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:30:53 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I drown the words with deceitful thoughts
Numb the pain with imaginary light
Let my fantasy fall in raindrops
Shower down inside me

CHORUS:
Swallowed up in my decietful reverie
Silent screams drift away from me
As I recede beneath my pool of hope
That one day I escape the real world
Where dreams carry me away
Where clouds cast away my hurt
Where these enchantments cannot cheat me
Where they wont harm me

A new set of tears soak my pillow
Thoughts burn through my skin
How I long to be away from slurring words
Catch the drift of my thunderstorm

Chorus

Where dreams carry me away
Where clouds cast away my hurt
Where these enchantments cannot cheat me
Where they wont harm me

My heart glistens on the wonders that betray me
I know my faithful dreams cannot forget me
For I wont let this life distroy me
I choose my dreams to take me
I choose my dreams to keep me
For now it is I they cannot see

CHORUS

They cant harm me
They cant see me
Here I hide
Where they wont harm me
Where they wont see me
Here I stay




Copyright © Soulless ... [ 2004-03-26 21:30:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Reverie (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:39:35 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Wonderful descriptions. Another great poem. :)


Re: Reverie (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:45:04 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
catchy tune:) keep writing, hugs n' love nessa


Re: Reverie (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:24:55 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Nicely done once again. You write with great emotion.
Roses
Larry


Re: Reverie (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:46:20 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
this was awesome. i really enjoyed it. well done keep it up.
Arden


Re: Reverie (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:20:40 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Terrific Descriptions
Loved It....Great Write
{{{{{{ Hugs }}}}}}
,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,


Re: Reverie (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:12:30 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
i found it hard to stop reading this. it just captures your mind till the very end. this is a great song/poem.

hugs
XgenX


Re: Reverie (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:39:06 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Beautiful song..now I'm waiting for the music...
Hur


Re: Reverie (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 03:28:34 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

beautiful an amazing, haunting song.

Bobo (Joel)




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com