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Love In The Fire Of Darkness Part Three (The Conclusion)
Contributed by
Solmyr1404
on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:57:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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I feel a crushing pain in my chest,
She's going to make my heart burst,
She's going to kill
My already broken heart.
"But you used to love me!" I choke out
Through my collapsing chest.
She stops squeezing for a moment,
Long enough to reveal a tear.
"I still do.
But you hurt me."
She begins squeezing my heart again,
Like a wet sponge.
Blood pours out like a river.
"You lied to me," she screams,
"You broke my heart!
If you really love me, prove it!"
I fight the pain
In my chest long enough to reach her,
To touch her face,
But then my heart is empty.
The blood remaining
Bursts out through a small hole...
The pain stops,
I do not die.
True love gave me life,
Though my heart was broken.
The girl is gone,
The blackness, the darkness
Returns.
Gradually, the pain fades,
But the memory of her anger
Does not.
Light slowly seeps in
Through my barely open eyes,
What a dream I had.
I crawl out of med and get dressed,
Go to the kitchen to eat breakfast.
She's there.
Waiting.
For me.
"So you really do love me," she says with tears in her eyes
As she throws her arms around me.
Was it really a dream,
Or was it really real?
I do know that through the burning
And darkness,
I proved my love for her.
Truly,
Love in the fire of darkness.
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Solmyr1404
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2004-03-26 15:57:59] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love In The Fire Of Darkness Part Three (The Conclusion)
(User Rating: 1 ) by kailadragon on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:24:57 PM AEST (User
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.......you Do realize that you submitted two "Love In The Fire Of Darkness Part Three's", right? anyways, nice conclusion
Kaila
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Re: Love In The Fire Of Darkness Part Three (The Conclusion)
(User Rating: 1 ) by reprobate on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 07:19:18 PM AEST (User
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interesting conundrum..... |
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Re: Love In The Fire Of Darkness Part Three (The Conclusion)
(User Rating: 1 ) by shorty_52 on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 06:33:53 PM AEST (User
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o wow!!!! that was amazing. holly sh**. that was so good. i see why it surprised even u. god damn. i can't get over how good that was. WOW!!!!! keep up that writing, it keeps the reader's in suspence.
great job!!!!!seriously. keep up the good work.
~allyson~ |
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