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Remember
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:18:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Four feet did mark the sand that day
When giggles tickled time away
Where lips and love forever play
Her hair enchanting ocean spray
(A lone man walks the sandy shore)
The gold had from the oceans waved
(His passion closed, his ankles sore)
His dreamy eyes by sunlight saved
(The ocean's splashes his heart tore)
Three words he had so boldly braved
Two longings so by love enslaved
Four handprints scoured the beach that eve
In every oath by both believed
The more they gave, the more received
Two pining souls by fate reprieved
(Didn't want the world, he wanted more--)
The gold still waved his heart away
Two footprints scratch the sand astray
Cold hands unsteady try to pray
--He tried to find lost love that day--
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EternitysLyre
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2004-03-26 09:18:11]
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Re: Remember
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:44:10 AM AEST
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| Oh my goodness, this was just breathtaking. It really stirred up emotion in me. The lines in italic are the best in the entire poem. You are a truly talented poet. |
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Re: Remember
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by gery_giggles on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:01:06 AM AEST
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ooo!...this is good and different!...i likes.its sad but in a way heartwarming
luv always |
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Re: Remember
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:58:54 PM AEST
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| This poem is breathtaking in its beauty ... an extraordinary write ... Jan |
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Re: Remember
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 09:02:27 PM AEST
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elegantly said eternity... just aboslutely breath taking... wonderful write through anf through...
Lindsey |
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