Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	01-June 11:50:18 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 40334 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Day It Ended [time] => 2004-03-26 09:10:14 [hometext] => A promise that was not kept... a final farewell [bodytext] => "What's this? you say that you are leaving?"
but your smile was so deceiving!"
That touch you placed upon my cheek,
now you say, I cannot keep?

Was i just a simple fool, thinking this was real?
love I thought you gave, I didn't mean to steal.
Words...to some are easy, so it was with you,
until today, you gave me not a clue.

Standing here, I watch...as you walk away,
I will try to remember, to forget this day.
I feel a splash of wetness, no...it isn't rain,
only eyes overflowing, from my hearts pain.

Do not look behind you, go steadily on your way,
there is nothing left to see, nothing left to say.
I will stand awhile, wondering how this all began,
then I'll walk away...and begin, all over again. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Justalady [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The Day It Ended

Contributed by Justalady on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:10:14 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

"What's this? you say that you are leaving?"
but your smile was so deceiving!"
That touch you placed upon my cheek,
now you say, I cannot keep?

Was i just a simple fool, thinking this was real?
love I thought you gave, I didn't mean to steal.
Words...to some are easy, so it was with you,
until today, you gave me not a clue.

Standing here, I watch...as you walk away,
I will try to remember, to forget this day.
I feel a splash of wetness, no...it isn't rain,
only eyes overflowing, from my hearts pain.

Do not look behind you, go steadily on your way,
there is nothing left to see, nothing left to say.
I will stand awhile, wondering how this all began,
then I'll walk away...and begin, all over again.

Copyright © Justalady ... [ 2004-03-26 09:10:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: The Day It Ended (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:47:53 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

That's so sad....I hope you've gotten past this.

Re: The Day It Ended (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:03:19 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

this is sad but there is strength in it.....stay strong!
luv always

Re: The Day It Ended (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:35:42 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

this is written from your heart so beautifully, same happened to me not too long agao, how people can just walk away after sweet words and supposed love is beyond me, you will find someone far better, that one did not deserve you, hugs n' love nessa

Re: The Day It Ended (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:12:40 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

"I will try to remember, to forget this day."

Isn't easy though, is it? For me it has been impossible. The heart may mend, but where do you put the memories for they never leave.

Rainbows,
Rita

Re: The Day It Ended (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:04:10 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I know the pain of your words, I live them everyday, a tortured soul a broken heart, the thought of another in replacement. All I had was memories, and they were tainted and stolen away. We keep on going though, always in hope. Thank you for sharing.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com