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Her......
Contributed by
Dizza_13
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 07:47:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The friendship that we have
that we have always had is great
but i need more than this for i feel
your power over me is incredible
it's like ur a drug, one look and i'm addicted.
The way you are, the way you act
it's like all about you is perfect
Your smart and fun and beautiful
and what's more i've actually spoken to you
I feel like this is just some teenage love
but it is all to real for that
I love you so deeply that i would give anything
not to have you, but for you to have me.........
I guess all i was trying to say was
I love you..............
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Dizza_13
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2004-03-26 07:47:06]
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Re: Her......
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by Stewie_Griffin on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 08:29:40 AM AEST
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I love your poem, cause it seems like you really feel that way, and that you're just not trying to write up a poem out of the air.
I also like it because it reminds me of myself and others when we feel the same way. |
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Re: Her......
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 06:24:56 PM AEST
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| nicely done. if it ment it will be. you are young and strong just give it time. patience is a good thing. good luck. |
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Re: Her......
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by Dizza_13 on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:56:13 AM AEST
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Thanks 4 the support. It's good to get feedback. And yes i do really feel this way.
Anyway Thanks to u all it really is nice to be given feedback.
cya all........... |
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