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Array ( [sid] => 40322 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => War Criminal [time] => 2004-03-26 04:33:58 [hometext] => This is the most violent poem I ever wrote. I didn't want to post it at first, but after a Canadian news program made a report about us beating detainees in Guantanamo Bay, I got tired of trying to convince people I'm not a babykiller. [bodytext] => Hey, Hey George W B,
How many lives did you give to me?
Shattered and broken
Their whole lives stolen
Right before their very eyes
Mom’s bleeding between her thighs
But the bleeding don’t cover up her crying
Her tears keep spilling, the blood keeps flowing
How many more villages will I kill?
As long as there is another village left standing still
The civilians here hate me
For their pain, I’m proud they claim me!
Because I’m a cold blooded murderer
I kill anyone I choose
***** the orders, I kill whoever
I ain’t got nothing to lose!
War Criminal, baby, the silent one
The one who lost it, who should’ve been done
But my orders were extended
Another six months to spend in this nation
I'm a War Criminal
You know it's true
And if you don't like it
I'll kill you too
I don’t believe in freedom
I believe in putting a bullet in your dome
Your children are crying-sweet music to my ears
Right before in their shirts I tear
Another bullet hole to a 3-year old chest
Too bad he didn’t have a Kevlar vest
In kiddie size, XXX small
Surprised they don’t sell them at your local mall
‘Cause as long as I’ll be here they’ll need to wear them to school
Even get them in colors, so the kids think it’s cool
But even with their body armor
I can just get closer
My rifle butt in their head
2 hits and they wind up dead
1 hit and they go unconscious
It’s obvious I have no conscience
An unlawful order?
No, not even an order
I kill just because
I have overactive bloodlust

I am, whatever you say I am.
I am this, because you say I am. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 59 [informant] => DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )
War Criminal

Contributed by DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:33:58 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



Hey, Hey George W B,
How many lives did you give to me?
Shattered and broken
Their whole lives stolen
Right before their very eyes
Mom’s bleeding between her thighs
But the bleeding don’t cover up her crying
Her tears keep spilling, the blood keeps flowing
How many more villages will I kill?
As long as there is another village left standing still
The civilians here hate me
For their pain, I’m proud they claim me!
Because I’m a cold blooded murderer
I kill anyone I choose
***** the orders, I kill whoever
I ain’t got nothing to lose!
War Criminal, baby, the silent one
The one who lost it, who should’ve been done
But my orders were extended
Another six months to spend in this nation
I'm a War Criminal
You know it's true
And if you don't like it
I'll kill you too
I don’t believe in freedom
I believe in putting a bullet in your dome
Your children are crying-sweet music to my ears
Right before in their shirts I tear
Another bullet hole to a 3-year old chest
Too bad he didn’t have a Kevlar vest
In kiddie size, XXX small
Surprised they don’t sell them at your local mall
‘Cause as long as I’ll be here they’ll need to wear them to school
Even get them in colors, so the kids think it’s cool
But even with their body armor
I can just get closer
My rifle butt in their head
2 hits and they wind up dead
1 hit and they go unconscious
It’s obvious I have no conscience
An unlawful order?
No, not even an order
I kill just because
I have overactive bloodlust

I am, whatever you say I am.
I am this, because you say I am.




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Re: War Criminal (User Rating: 1 )
by DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:46:02 AM AEST
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BTW-the news report I mentioned in the heading is false. They put 2 former detainnes on the air and they claimed they were beaten daily. The news program didn't interview any guards there, and only briefly mentioned that the government denies abusing the detainees. It was obviously a biased report.

The only time a detainee is beaten in GTMO is when he is endangering the lives of the soldiers guarding him. Even if we wanted to beat them for our own personal amusement, we couldn't because the Red Cross keeps the place under a freakin' microscope.

But hey, if you still think I'm a war criminal, then, like I said, I am whatever you say I am!


Re: War Criminal (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:48:39 AM AEST
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you know thats just what "they" say dont you? and that you dont actually have to be like that? im gonna print this one out......put it on my wall with the other dark **** i got.
...keep writing...
--Rianne Ashleigh


Re: War Criminal (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:59:04 AM AEST
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this is so sad.
Very well written tho.
I fell out with our President when he denied our soilders that were terized by the idiots over there in Irac. Said they would use that money to rebuild their country. If he can't support our troops then he's not good enuff for me to call him president.
I think he needs to go hold hands with the ones over there killing our soilders 'cause if he withholds the money then he has a big problem.
Luv, huggs,
emy


Re: War Criminal (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:37:57 AM AEST
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Of course, this could be the mentality of a lot of people in the US at the moment.

It's also a more extreme form of the thinking Bush is relying on to keep power.

But more and more people are Fighting Back! [thenextwar.blogspot.com]




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