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I cried my little heart for reasons unbeknown
I thought it may be normal, I thought i was just scared
I thought the pain was numbing, but how little did I know
My thoughts became delusions, my life a hopeless wreck
My prayers not yet been answered, my mind not yet set free
I feel no more desire, and no more sympathy.
And yet I struggle onward for reasons unbeknown [comments] => 8 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 21 [informant] => JennyFruFru [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Why me?

Contributed by JennyFruFru on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:41:51 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Long, long ago when I was a girl
I cried my little heart for reasons unbeknown
I thought it may be normal, I thought i was just scared
I thought the pain was numbing, but how little did I know
My thoughts became delusions, my life a hopeless wreck
My prayers not yet been answered, my mind not yet set free
I feel no more desire, and no more sympathy.
And yet I struggle onward for reasons unbeknown

Copyright © JennyFruFru ... [ 2004-03-26 00:41:51]
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Re: Why me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:52:41 AM AEST
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A warm welcome to YPDC...the best poetry site on the net....
This was extremely well done....It flowed so beautifully.... and had a good message...
Hope to see lots more soon..
Jenni

Re: Why me? (User Rating: 1 )
by badlander on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 02:05:07 AM AEST
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Excellent, and I agree "The first step is..., the first step." Keep on pluggin'!
tony

Re: Why me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:09:09 AM AEST
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thats really pretty....i cant write like that...not that good atleaste lol
....keep writing...
--Rianne Ashleigh

Re: Why me? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:58:40 AM AEST
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so sad but inspiring excellent message:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Why me? (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:02:34 AM AEST
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WOW,WHAT A POEM! YOU WROTE IT FROM PAST TO PRESENT-VERY IMPRESSIVE!! YOU WRITE REALLY GOOD!!!
DAN!!!!

Re: Why me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:31:49 PM AEST
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And you proceed with grace! Strong poem with a strong message enveloped in it.
Hur

Re: Why me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:53:23 AM AEST
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Please keep struggling because at the end of the struggle you will have become a stronger wiser person. No one promised us a perfect life. We got life and it is up to us, individually, to make it what we want. Choose a path, be strong, put one foot in front of the other until you get to where you want to go. Worked for me, it should work for you too. You will be what you want to be!

Hugs and rainbows,
Rita

Re: Why me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 02:51:08 PM AEST
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Keep dreaming! Hope is what keeps you going. I't good that you have that hope.
Welcome! It's nice to have you here! I'll be reading more of your works!
Take care.
David

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