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Array ( [sid] => 40264 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gonna Commit Suicide [time] => 2004-03-25 18:15:40 [hometext] => This is just a feeling I'm not actually planning on commiting suicide. [bodytext] => Verse 1

Hate my life
Gonna leave this world
To much strife
And no girl

Chorus

Gonna commit suicide
Suicide
Can't live this horrible life
Gonna commit suicide
Suicide
I'm gonna fall down

Verse 2

Got good friends in
And a good family
In my world
My fantasy

Chorus

Verse 3

In real life
my friends are well
but my mother sucks
and she can...GO TO HELL

Chorus

Bridge
To my mom
I want you to know
That I hate you
And I'm all alone
and you'll hate it when you find
that my suicide
was because of YOU

Revised Chorus

Gonna commit suicide
Suicide
Can't live this horrible life
Gonna commit suicide
Suicide
And it's all your fault
Yeah [comments] => 4 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 34 [informant] => dark_angel_of_poetry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Gonna Commit Suicide

Contributed by dark_angel_of_poetry on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 06:15:40 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Verse 1

Hate my life
Gonna leave this world
To much strife
And no girl

Chorus

Gonna commit suicide
Suicide
Can't live this horrible life
Gonna commit suicide
Suicide
I'm gonna fall down

Verse 2

Got good friends in
And a good family
In my world
My fantasy

Chorus

Verse 3

In real life
my friends are well
but my mother sucks
and she can...GO TO HELL

Chorus

Bridge
To my mom
I want you to know
That I hate you
And I'm all alone
and you'll hate it when you find
that my suicide
was because of YOU

Revised Chorus

Gonna commit suicide
Suicide
Can't live this horrible life
Gonna commit suicide
Suicide
And it's all your fault
Yeah

Copyright © dark_angel_of_poetry ... [ 2004-03-25 18:15:40]
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Re: Gonna Commit Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 06:27:36 PM AEST
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Sounds like you hate your mother....and thank you for clarifying that you are not planning on actaully committing suicide.
I really rather like this as a song - I hear it rather fast and loud - do you have a band?

merry

Re: Gonna Commit Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 06:34:41 PM AEST
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u must be very young!!so am i,but i have grown up to love my mom no matter how much of a b*itch she is,ur mother is probably strict but that just cuz she wants the best for u,i hope u actually wouldn't kill urself just cuz ur mom,and in fact i'd hope u wouldn't kill urself at all,stay alive and learn how to love,nice song,it is very vioceful

cheech

Re: Gonna Commit Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by fallen_eyes on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 06:35:11 PM AEST
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I must agree i do like this and also hear it quite loud and fast, bit rock like, be good song if you have a band. I'm glad you don't really feel like that, I don't wish for anyone to have to experience something like that

Re: Gonna Commit Suicide (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 08:14:38 PM AEST
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I think this would be a great song i would buy this CD if you had one . and i can relate to this song. but i hate my dad some times he and me just dont get along. i feel this song its fast and loud kind of feeling to me.

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