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A Desperate Plea

Contributed by makx10 on Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 06:49:15 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Why can't you just see?
That you and I are meant to be
Meant to be in every single way.
Meant to love each other every single day.

Can't you see my eyes filled with tears?
What exactly is it that you fear?
Are you afraid of me?
Are you afraid of what you may see?
Or perhaps of what you think you will be?

Am I really that bad?
Did I ever make you that mad?
To not want to share with me,
Something we could share so intimately.

Its not all about the sex
Its not all about lifting my haunting hex.
This is about wanting much more
This is aobut opening a special door.

A door that has blocked us from
So many special things that may come
Many new feelings to be felt
Feelings that will make our hearts melt

We get so close and you pull away.
These games I can no longer play.
I don't understand if you love me so much.
Why its so hard for you to touch.

You tell me its not about me.
You say its what you believe.
Well try to believe in you and I.
Believe that we could fly so high.

High above all that you've known.
I love you more than I have ever shown.
To be with you would be a dream come true.
But I know that there are dreams inside of you.

I wish that you could see a different view.
Don't your feelings give you a clue?
If its for love, then why can't you see?
There is nothing wrong wtih being with me.

I can't create a desire for me.
But all I want is to be free,
To share love for you in a different way.
Maybe you will be ready to be with me one day.




Copyright © makx10 ... [ 2002-09-19 06:49:15]
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Re: A Desperate Plea (User Rating: 1 )
by MisterRight on Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 03:05:32 PM AEST
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Excellent write. Wow, I can relate. I think we may be in love with the same girl.

Curtis


Re: A Desperate Plea (User Rating: 1 )
by MisterRight on Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 03:10:31 PM AEST
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For some reason I assumed you are a guy, speaking of a girl, but that may not be the case. I guess I made that assumption because your poem fit my case so well. Anyway, if you're not a guy, I didn't mean to offend.

Curtis




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