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Array ( [sid] => 40159 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Winter Rose [time] => 2004-03-25 02:45:40 [hometext] => *Sigh* [bodytext] => Sleeping here side by side
dreams entwined around
each other so pleasantly.

Who would have thought
that we would have
come together like this.
We met and talked,
danced, and went for a walk.

The moon seemed to follow us
keeping the path ahead lit.
Stars winked that night
as we walked hand in hand.

Snow lightly fell making
you look like an angel.
Every word spoken
and every step taken
seemed perfect and planned.

Kissing you gently in bliss
teased longing playfully.
Exertion uneeded when
everything feels natural
and perfectly right.

All limits exceeded
with every word and kiss.
We played all night long
throwing snowballs laughing
all the while in childlike ecstasy.

Trying to build a snowman
ten feet tall with all our might.
Falling all over each other
with angels spread all over.

Raven's Sin [comments] => 9 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cobalt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Winter Rose

Contributed by Cobalt on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:45:40 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Sleeping here side by side
dreams entwined around
each other so pleasantly.

Who would have thought
that we would have
come together like this.
We met and talked,
danced, and went for a walk.

The moon seemed to follow us
keeping the path ahead lit.
Stars winked that night
as we walked hand in hand.

Snow lightly fell making
you look like an angel.
Every word spoken
and every step taken
seemed perfect and planned.

Kissing you gently in bliss
teased longing playfully.
Exertion uneeded when
everything feels natural
and perfectly right.

All limits exceeded
with every word and kiss.
We played all night long
throwing snowballs laughing
all the while in childlike ecstasy.

Trying to build a snowman
ten feet tall with all our might.
Falling all over each other
with angels spread all over.

Raven's Sin

Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2004-03-25 02:45:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Winter Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:54:43 AM AEST
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There are few things more romantic than simply being playful...

Great poem, I enjoyed it quite a bit. You made it easy to picture everything, leaving behind a lasting impression--and one memorable poem.

Truly,
-V.S.

Re: Winter Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:55:32 AM AEST
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~SIGH~ Can I bottle this moment? I love it when situations like this happen... and I love reading about them. Great write!!!

Ginsdance
(Jen)

Re: Winter Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 03:10:49 AM AEST
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very pretty and romantic, i like your style here, hugs n' love nessa

Re: Winter Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 03:33:56 AM AEST
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That is soooooo pretty, Jeff... you were right, I love it! Made me feel all weepy... lol. Now that is the stuff of life.

~ Moonlit

Re: Winter Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 04:01:29 AM AEST
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A beautiful dream of play..venkat

Re: Winter Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:43:45 AM AEST
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This was so picturesque. You painted the snow scenes and playfulness so clearly in my mind. It will snow again and those moments will come again and I hope they are everything and more than you dreamed. You have done a fine job in regards to this poem. Kie

Re: Winter Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:14:26 PM AEST
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Yes, a very lovely picture. Having grown up in the north, it brings back memories. Nice stuff.
Stitch

Re: Winter Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:47:30 PM AEST
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Ah... the tenderness of love...a winter rose indeed,

in the coldest of winters
blooms "winter rose"
love's flower.

Great work.... such tender description of more tender moments!

Re: Winter Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 02:27:52 PM AEST
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you have done it again Jeff I love the way you express love in your poetry makes it seem so sweet thanks

michelle

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