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Keeps on striving to have another breath
The walls have already started to fall
The once beautiful eyes are now dull
So confused wanting a direction to go
The time ticking will never go slow
Everything seems to sleep right on through
She forgot everything that she never knew
She could of had it all
The endless road came to an end
She tried so hard to break her fall
If only someone had love to lend
There was just too much pressure to take
Just one last deep breath that she could make
The last choice in her life was only a mistake
She fell asleep to end up never awake
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She's Following the Road to Death

Contributed by Coaster on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 01:25:29 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

She is following the road to death
Keeps on striving to have another breath
The walls have already started to fall
The once beautiful eyes are now dull
So confused wanting a direction to go
The time ticking will never go slow
Everything seems to sleep right on through
She forgot everything that she never knew
She could of had it all
The endless road came to an end
She tried so hard to break her fall
If only someone had love to lend
There was just too much pressure to take
Just one last deep breath that she could make
The last choice in her life was only a mistake
She fell asleep to end up never awake

Copyright © Coaster ... [ 2004-03-25 01:25:29]
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Re: She's Following the Road to Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 12:22:33 AM AEST
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That's a very sad story...I think it's sad how people who commit suicide only realise the impact of their decision only when they're already on the verge of dying. Well done and take care.

Re: She's Following the Road to Death (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:20:02 PM AEST
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its poetry like yours that makes me realize when i look back at my life how much of a mistake it would have been. thank you.

love and hugs
XgenX

Re: She's Following the Road to Death (User Rating: 1 )
by mystiquepearl on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 01:32:49 AM AEST
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an explendid peom..you use poetry to make your point...death/suicide is so easy to concieve that it seems so sweet...but the awful truth is its stupid mistake...it will not solve anything but jst put distress on everyone..i really like this poem...save me from doing the same thing... thank you

Re: She's Following the Road to Death (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:14:28 PM AEST
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this is such a sad poem...beautifully written and heart wrenching...

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