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[aid] => mick
[title] => ankh
[time] => 2004-03-25 00:05:06
[hometext] => freedom within' souls who write n' live by this poetic aspiring collocation, knowing this was it all worth the momentary honesty of love's expression...
[bodytext] =>
all it ever would have taken... one sweetly spoken simple word,
from heartfelt silent lips, but 'twas never heard...
was love, perhaps, just some empty sighs, to call
me back to fall again within' his arms and charms
alas, these words were never uttered, expressed nor
breathed, there was no completeness; just an empty
ending to some silly dream... undying love died; flown
on to some other visions; or unsuspecting heart, were
these moments ever true, real, or just two vivid writer's
imaginations falling spiraling flowing on the roads amazed
to nowhere's separation; and all because the love given,
shared and taken is no longer there,
unspoken.
§* *§
*|*
[comments] => 16
[counter] => 279
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[informant] => ladyfawn
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[score] => 90
[ratings] => 18
[editpoem] => 1
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[topicname] => LoveRemembered
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ankh
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:05:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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all it ever would have taken... one sweetly spoken simple word,
from heartfelt silent lips, but 'twas never heard...
was love, perhaps, just some empty sighs, to call
me back to fall again within' his arms and charms
alas, these words were never uttered, expressed nor
breathed, there was no completeness; just an empty
ending to some silly dream... undying love died; flown
on to some other visions; or unsuspecting heart, were
these moments ever true, real, or just two vivid writer's
imaginations falling spiraling flowing on the roads amazed
to nowhere's separation; and all because the love given,
shared and taken is no longer there,
unspoken.
§* *§
*|*
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2004-03-25 00:05:06]
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Re: ankh
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by twinkletoes on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:13:38 AM AEST
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... undying love died
what simple complexity, It grabs me by the heart strings nessa.
tt |
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Re: ankh
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:20:55 AM AEST
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this is so sad ((nessa)) but written so very beautifully and with such feeling. You know I am here for ya if you need me.
Roses
Larry |
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by venkat on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 01:24:53 AM AEST
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| Emotional..sad..beautiful..truthful..heartfelt heart touching, great piece..Oh, Nessa,..:o) venkat |
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Re: ankh
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 01:41:00 AM AEST
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I don't believe there is a symbol of forever that works, but for some strange reason I hang on to the crux ansata I wore for a couple of early young years. I guess I just can't stop believing. I run across it occasionally in a jewelry box and wonder why I keep it, but it is the memories associated with it, I suppose.
Love n hugs, Nessa,
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Re: ankh
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:17:04 AM AEST
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beautiful and heartfelt as always. I haven't logged onto the sight in a while, but I was happy to see one of your poems first when I did. You always write so beautifully. Another excellent piece.
Jen |
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 04:41:58 AM AEST
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What a beautiufl poem! Its so touching and sad! Awesome write!
Anne :D |
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Re: ankh
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by Kie on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:54:19 AM AEST
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| A very unique title. I wish I had the answers to the questions in your poem. Like a magic wand that could make love never leave and people would only cry tears of joy. This one touched my heart. Kie |
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Re: ankh
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 03:43:59 PM AEST
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| Nessa, you speak the truth my friend. Although this might be a sad write, it's beautiful. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: ankh
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 07:28:31 PM AEST
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i can still hear your sad, yet beautiful words echo on..
you write with such wisdom nessa..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: ankh
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by arden on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:30:42 PM AEST
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i love this! so beautiful so well written. just awesome! well done yet again.
Arden |
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:55:24 PM AEST
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| Nessa, what can I say ... this poem brings tears to my eyes ... you write with such beauty and tenderness ... hugs Jan |
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Re: ankh
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by Merry on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 11:46:11 AM AEST
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a heart of cold unfeeling stone is in the breast of he who cannot say the words out loud - and in that solitude and darkness dwell forever and alone -
a fantastic write nessa - a long sigh as my heart contemplates your words -
hugs
merry |
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Re: ankh
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 07:44:49 PM AEST
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Someday, my friend... someone wil speak those words and mean them... and your heart will sing forever..
Luv and hugs..
Jenni |
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Re: ankh
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 03:27:09 PM AEST
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beautiful flow of language and deep thought, well done.
wildej. |
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:26:15 PM AEST
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this is.... breathtaking in it's beauty. And it's complexity... wow.
*J* |
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Re: ankh
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:15:01 PM AEST
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| This is very good. I know what it feels like to lose opportunities. That is what this reminded me of is the friendships i could 've made deeper. I know what you rea speaking about is much different. |
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