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Array ( [sid] => 40136 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => dance to a new song [time] => 2004-03-24 23:24:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The music plays softly
The lights are dimmed low
Our bodies entwined
Our movement so very slow

Our eyes locked together
So beautiful and round
Yours blue and sparkling
Mine a soft liquid brown

Lips gently caress
Bodies held tight
With you holding me close
I feel so free and light

Our passion builds a song at a time
Slowly your hands slid under my dress
Our breathing grows shallow
As I tilt my head up for your kiss

My hands work to slide your shirt off
My lips taste your naked skin
Your muscles tense, your breath sucked in
As a new song will soon begin
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dance to a new song

Contributed by mercedes on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 11:24:37 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The music plays softly
The lights are dimmed low
Our bodies entwined
Our movement so very slow

Our eyes locked together
So beautiful and round
Yours blue and sparkling
Mine a soft liquid brown

Lips gently caress
Bodies held tight
With you holding me close
I feel so free and light

Our passion builds a song at a time
Slowly your hands slid under my dress
Our breathing grows shallow
As I tilt my head up for your kiss

My hands work to slide your shirt off
My lips taste your naked skin
Your muscles tense, your breath sucked in
As a new song will soon begin

Copyright © mercedes ... [ 2004-03-24 23:24:37]
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Re: dance to a new song (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:44:26 AM AEST
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Beautiful. I've read two poems tonight here that really touched my heart... this one and another by ladyfawn. This seems to echo my own feelings about my special guy... thanks for sharing your write!

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Re: dance to a new song (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:50:40 AM AEST
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Very nice mercedes. I enjoyed this one rather well. Very soft and sensual write from you.

Re: dance to a new song (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 04:58:33 AM AEST
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The start of a beautiful dream, wonderful poem. Sweet memories in the dark night, thank you for sharing.

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