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Wasn't There Something
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 09:04:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I tried to keep my heart from breaking
I knew exactly what I had to choose
But I couldn't prevent you from being taken
Away from me, so now I got nothing to lose
Wasn't there something you could've said
To let me know, so I would've been prepared
Maybe it wouldn't hurt as bad
If I wasn't denying that once you cared
The pieces of my love at your feet
I really need you right now
To shine your light on my street
I'm tripping, but keep on walking anyhow
Wasn't there something you could've done
To lessen the pain you brought on me
So from my life you're gone
But I miss you just as much,
Even though you I don't see
Copyright ©
New_York_Chick
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2004-03-24 21:04:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Wasn't There Something
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 09:23:40 PM AEST (User
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this is very sad but so genuinely penned, so heartfelt, i see you walking down that street.... hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Wasn't There Something
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 09:41:43 PM AEST (User
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OMG...this is so touching....I loved it..hope you feel better soon...
Jenni |
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Re: Wasn't There Something
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 10:16:07 PM AEST (User
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I know it sounds really cliche' but life does go on in spite of the pain and disappointment. The one thing I have learned with age is that is hardship makes us a little stronger and a little wiser and hopefully a little more cautious the next time. Hope things get better soon.
Rainbows,
Rita |
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Re: Wasn't There Something
(User Rating: 1 ) by twinkletoes on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:36:05 AM AEST (User
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I'm tripping, but keep on walking anyhow
this line is in a nice style, i like it's use here. lovely poem
tt |
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