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Array ( [sid] => 40064 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Walk Away From Me [time] => 2004-03-24 15:16:13 [hometext] => sorry a little long [bodytext] => This is my last ditch attempt to reach you.
This is all killing me inside.
I look around and see the chaos in are lives
and my eyes are open very wide.
You said "walk away from me, I'm only going to hurt you
Walk away from me, I will only make you cry
Walk away from me, I am only going to hurt you
Walk wawy from me, and just let me die"
I think of all the years I've watched you drown your pain
come up to surface and then drown your self again.
I've always kept the hope that someday you'll see light.
But the water is over my head, and I'm scared I cannot win this fight.
You said " walk away from me, I'm only going to hurt you
Walk away from me, I told you from the start
Walk away from me, I will only bring you sadness
Walk away from me, I will only break your heart."
Some people bury all their troubles in a bottle.
Some people choose to stick a needle in their arm.
When I saw you I thought love was all you needed
But you proved me wrong.
I wish I could walk away from you, you only know to hurt me.
Walk away from you, you only make me cry
Walk away from you, you only bring me sorrow
Walk away from you, loving you is killing me inside. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Tequila [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Walk Away From Me

Contributed by Tequila on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:16:13 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



This is my last ditch attempt to reach you.
This is all killing me inside.
I look around and see the chaos in are lives
and my eyes are open very wide.
You said "walk away from me, I'm only going to hurt you
Walk away from me, I will only make you cry
Walk away from me, I am only going to hurt you
Walk wawy from me, and just let me die"
I think of all the years I've watched you drown your pain
come up to surface and then drown your self again.
I've always kept the hope that someday you'll see light.
But the water is over my head, and I'm scared I cannot win this fight.
You said " walk away from me, I'm only going to hurt you
Walk away from me, I told you from the start
Walk away from me, I will only bring you sadness
Walk away from me, I will only break your heart."
Some people bury all their troubles in a bottle.
Some people choose to stick a needle in their arm.
When I saw you I thought love was all you needed
But you proved me wrong.
I wish I could walk away from you, you only know to hurt me.
Walk away from you, you only make me cry
Walk away from you, you only bring me sorrow
Walk away from you, loving you is killing me inside.




Copyright © Tequila ... [ 2004-03-24 15:16:13]
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Re: Walk Away From Me (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:28:54 PM AEST
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ahh it was'nt that long . quite nice actually.
makes me wonder though why it is we seem to fall for the people who hurt us most. but anyways good work, your friend doug


Re: Walk Away From Me (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:52:18 PM AEST
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hun if that was long my poems take centuries to read ;) i liked it a lot. its sad when someone has those emotions those feelings its sad to read but its worse knowing that they had to feel that to write it. great writing




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