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Array ( [sid] => 40052 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When [time] => 2004-03-24 12:32:34 [hometext] => Someone on another forum has as a sig something to the effect of 'I await the day I am judged by Christ and not by Christians' [bodytext] => When will you come
and save us
from what we have become.

Your people of peace
have become a race of war.
With the power
to destroy all creation.

Your words of love
have been turned
into messages of hate.

Your stewards
have failed
in their stewardship.
Instead acting as conquerors.

When will you come?
What are you waiting for?
How much longer?

I fear sometimes,
that it may be never.
That it is all
an illusion. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 11 [informant] => Dralion [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

When

Contributed by Dralion on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 12:32:34 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

When will you come
and save us
from what we have become.

Your people of peace
have become a race of war.
With the power
to destroy all creation.

Your words of love
have been turned
into messages of hate.

Your stewards
have failed
in their stewardship.
Instead acting as conquerors.

When will you come?
What are you waiting for?
How much longer?

I fear sometimes,
that it may be never.
That it is all
an illusion.

Copyright © Dralion ... [ 2004-03-24 12:32:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 12:54:58 PM AEST
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i also wonder at times but my heart keeps me strong wonder expression

michelle

Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:27:23 PM AEST
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Don't get discouraged, down lose your faith.
He is coming just almost anyday now.
Almost all the prophecies have been fulfilled.
He will usher in a new system where love will take over, and hate will be done away with.
Wonderful future ahead....so don't give up!
I loved this poem.....so full of hope
for the future!
consue

Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by 8kiwi8 on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 08:14:02 AM AEST
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I'm really not religious at all but this doeas make you think and it is completely true, you've put it into words nicely without sounding angry like those who you're describing i really like it.
I also like that 'other person on another forum' s sig it makes a really good point lol

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