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Array ( [sid] => 40038 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Kiss your grave [time] => 2004-03-24 10:34:38 [hometext] => true story that is happening to my right now, i dont know what to do, thought i'd vent. [bodytext] => i just cant sit back
and watch you throw it all away,
its hard to sit and lie,
that everything is going to be alright,
i've tried to help with out you knowing,
i've even tried to help when it was snowing,
but snow wasnt the white stuff you wanted,
it was coke, crack, sumthing that you didn't lack,
i wanted to scream out for help,
i kept it all under my belt,
but in the end, all was lost,
i went and tried to tell your mother,
even your father and your brother,
you told me, no im not addicted,
but to pain killers you were,
you denied the help to go to rehab,
and you couldn't see all the bad.
im sorry if i scare you,
but look at it like this,
i will give your grave a kiss,
when you OD, on everything
the pot, robo, crack, its all such a smack.
im sorry that im not a better friend.
i wanted to help you but i cant. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 50 [informant] => icryblacktearz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )

Kiss your grave

Contributed by icryblacktearz on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 10:34:38 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

i just cant sit back
and watch you throw it all away,
its hard to sit and lie,
that everything is going to be alright,
i've tried to help with out you knowing,
i've even tried to help when it was snowing,
but snow wasnt the white stuff you wanted,
it was coke, crack, sumthing that you didn't lack,
i wanted to scream out for help,
i kept it all under my belt,
but in the end, all was lost,
i went and tried to tell your mother,
even your father and your brother,
you told me, no im not addicted,
but to pain killers you were,
you denied the help to go to rehab,
and you couldn't see all the bad.
im sorry if i scare you,
but look at it like this,
i will give your grave a kiss,
when you OD, on everything
the pot, robo, crack, its all such a smack.
im sorry that im not a better friend.
i wanted to help you but i cant.

Copyright © icryblacktearz ... [ 2004-03-24 10:34:38]
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Re: Kiss your grave (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 10:51:21 AM AEST
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That's so sad, but i suppose people can really only be helped if they want to receive it. Unfortunately hitting rock bottom is what makes alot wake up to themselves but can be too late. I have had a few friends like that, it's tragic.

Very powerful, i hope it all turns out for the best.

Good luck..

Re: Kiss your grave (User Rating: 1 )
by moon_light on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:30:02 PM AEST
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never give up.
some times thats what thay need.
show them this and promis to be thair to the end
love
moon light

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