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Array ( [sid] => 40026 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Countess Báthory Nadasdy speaks - To Mankind [time] => 2004-03-24 06:34:35 [hometext] => Musings of the Countess on the hypocrisy of mankind [bodytext] => A gorging maggot
Dwelling in the damp darkness
Crackling and crunching
It indulges itself in
Its blurred depraved gluttony

A young painted girl
Hangs out in obscurity
Leering eyes mirrored
In the lights of passing cars
She embodies lawlessness

A longbearded tramp
Shuffles loudly in secrecy
Dirty and drinking
He brings up wind, swears and sings
His crude sing-song monologue

Quavering silence
That stretches itself at dusk
Fair and menacing
Covered by omniscient stars
It opens its bloodshed chase

You sleep by day
In what once was the Wild West
Dandled by morals

You sleep by day
In what once was the New World
Hid in ignorance

Smug breathing puppets
Moved by ratio’s straw men
You put on a live show

Live rigor mortis
All lined up – none out of the ranks
You’re the real Undead

What are you thinking?
That it really likes to eat
Your stinking remains?
Intoxicating the world
It deals with them properly

What are you thinking?
That she really loves it there?
Her body luring
Forbidden fruit, on her own
With two children on her mind

What are you thinking?
That he shouts to annoy you?
You can’t be that vain
This abhorred, dispised outcast
Cries for his mother at night

What are you thinking?
That I’m a brutish butcher
From a children’s tale?
Know that when I feed on you
I’ll pay you likewise respect

Erzsébet

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The Countess Báthory Nadasdy speaks - To Mankind

Contributed by Hurretje on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:34:35 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



A gorging maggot
Dwelling in the damp darkness
Crackling and crunching
It indulges itself in
Its blurred depraved gluttony

A young painted girl
Hangs out in obscurity
Leering eyes mirrored
In the lights of passing cars
She embodies lawlessness

A longbearded tramp
Shuffles loudly in secrecy
Dirty and drinking
He brings up wind, swears and sings
His crude sing-song monologue

Quavering silence
That stretches itself at dusk
Fair and menacing
Covered by omniscient stars
It opens its bloodshed chase

You sleep by day
In what once was the Wild West
Dandled by morals

You sleep by day
In what once was the New World
Hid in ignorance

Smug breathing puppets
Moved by ratio’s straw men
You put on a live show

Live rigor mortis
All lined up – none out of the ranks
You’re the real Undead

What are you thinking?
That it really likes to eat
Your stinking remains?
Intoxicating the world
It deals with them properly

What are you thinking?
That she really loves it there?
Her body luring
Forbidden fruit, on her own
With two children on her mind

What are you thinking?
That he shouts to annoy you?
You can’t be that vain
This abhorred, dispised outcast
Cries for his mother at night

What are you thinking?
That I’m a brutish butcher
From a children’s tale?
Know that when I feed on you
I’ll pay you likewise respect

Erzsébet





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Re: The Countess Báthory Nadasdy speaks - To Mankind (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:46:44 AM AEST
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Ummmh....welldone..I enjoyed your fantatic verse.best of luck. venkat


Re: The Countess Báthory Nadasdy speaks - To Mankind (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:47:24 AM AEST
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lol, i have never read anything like it, you have a way with words i really respect.

Your writing has definately caught my eye :)

Thank you for all your comments, they mean alot to me.

Silent


Re: The Countess Báthory Nadasdy speaks - To Mankind (User Rating: 1 )
by Drive_By on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:23:51 AM AEST
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Interesting viewpoint....wooohoooo....


Re: The Countess Báthory Nadasdy speaks - To Mankind (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:13:10 PM AEST
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"What are you thinking?
That I?m a brutish butcher
From a children?s tale?
Know that when I feed on you
I?ll pay you likewise respect" - - *speechless*
*I sigh and log off.... to return for your beauty at a later time. *


Re: The Countess Báthory Nadasdy speaks - To Mankind (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 11:22:53 PM AEST
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This a channeled piece? Yet it also has the medium asking the questions. I like this very much. This Countess has tupped with Rasputin and made borscht with Madame Blavatsky. It has the wisdom of Gurdjeiff as the "...brutish butcher..." feeds as symbiote paying in "respect" distinct from the "gorging maggot" parasite at the All You Can Eat Buffet of human hypocrises.

Peace
Yangdantien




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