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Array ( [sid] => 40020 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Transparent Girl [time] => 2004-03-24 05:16:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My life is nothing but a WORTHLESS MESS,
Full of hope but OVERCOME BY DISTRESS,
Living a LIFE WITHOUT MEANING,
Wishing I'd wake from all of this dreaming,
Knowing I'LL NEVER FIND THAT GIRL to calm my fears,
MAKES ME SAD and come to tears,
To have her, to hold her, to let her know I'm here,
As long as I am near, I'll always hold her dear,
Just so she can understand my UNSUCCESSFUL LIFE,
To stop me, to keep me from PICKING UP THAT KNIFE,
But this isTOO MUCH TO ASK FOR you see,
I'LL NEVER FIND THAT GIRL to tell me she loves nobody else but me. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 61 [informant] => DoubleONate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Transparent Girl

Contributed by DoubleONate on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:16:44 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

My life is nothing but a WORTHLESS MESS,
Full of hope but OVERCOME BY DISTRESS,
Living a LIFE WITHOUT MEANING,
Wishing I'd wake from all of this dreaming,
Knowing I'LL NEVER FIND THAT GIRL to calm my fears,
MAKES ME SAD and come to tears,
To have her, to hold her, to let her know I'm here,
As long as I am near, I'll always hold her dear,
Just so she can understand my UNSUCCESSFUL LIFE,
To stop me, to keep me from PICKING UP THAT KNIFE,
But this isTOO MUCH TO ASK FOR you see,
I'LL NEVER FIND THAT GIRL to tell me she loves nobody else but me.

Copyright © DoubleONate ... [ 2004-03-24 05:16:44]
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Re: Transparent Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:37:41 AM AEST
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if only someone like you lived in maui...lol

Re: Transparent Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:53:36 AM AEST
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Oh So Sad..
But Yet A Great Write..
Hang In There That
Perfect Girl Will Show Up
You'll See. {{{ Hugs }}}
,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,

Re: Transparent Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by bluoreo on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:10:19 AM AEST
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I really like the write Nathan. Great title (laughs). Everything will work out some day......trust me.
-bluoreo (eric)

Re: Transparent Girl (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 07:51:24 PM AEST
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:-| you remind me so much of me...(cept im not a guy)...don't give up man she'll show up...don't let go of all hope yet...i felt jus like you do...and i found my perfect guy...just be pateint...
Great, sad poem.
-WWD

Re: Transparent Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 10:38:49 PM AEST
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Aww,God had a special plan for you and judging by your faith and your heart,that girl will surely come to you,just remember that God knows the right time and maybe that time isn't right for you now.Nicely expressed,

PumpkinPie

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