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Array ( [sid] => 39953 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your hell is my Paradise [time] => 2004-03-23 18:32:39 [hometext] => Just one i wrote....kinda strange take a look. Many meanings what one do u see? [bodytext] => Hand me an other marshmallow
For I am surrounded by the warmth of a fire
The pitchfork dude itches my back
MMM the marshmallow is toasted just right
Sit back and cuddle with my George
Watching the fire all around us
To you this may be hell
But it is my paradise
The fire doesn’t burn
The fire doesn’t hurt
George protects me from all the hurt
He grins down at me
It isn’t burning him either
I pull him close and our lips brush each other
To you this may be hell
But it is my paradise
Hand me another marshmallow
Before the fire goes out
George lightly touches me as the fire enrages again
This fire will never go out
As long as George is by my side
To you this might seem like hell
But to me it’s my paradise
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Your hell is my Paradise

Contributed by lil_angel on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 06:32:39 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous



Hand me an other marshmallow
For I am surrounded by the warmth of a fire
The pitchfork dude itches my back
MMM the marshmallow is toasted just right
Sit back and cuddle with my George
Watching the fire all around us
To you this may be hell
But it is my paradise
The fire doesn’t burn
The fire doesn’t hurt
George protects me from all the hurt
He grins down at me
It isn’t burning him either
I pull him close and our lips brush each other
To you this may be hell
But it is my paradise
Hand me another marshmallow
Before the fire goes out
George lightly touches me as the fire enrages again
This fire will never go out
As long as George is by my side
To you this might seem like hell
But to me it’s my paradise




Copyright © lil_angel ... [ 2004-03-23 18:32:39]
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Re: Your hell is my Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 07:28:38 PM AEST
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*sniffle* i miss this sort of life, you're so damn lucky! this is beautiful, beyond compare...


Re: Your hell is my Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:32:40 PM AEST
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i dont really understand why it would b hell.. ??.. but im glad it is your paradise.. good work!!


Re: Your hell is my Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:46:13 PM AEST
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Such a beautiful write. Love is in the air. *S* Cynthia


Re: Your hell is my Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 09:04:32 AM AEST
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Beautiful write lil angel.... I'm with Remy on this one.


Re: Your hell is my Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:10:27 PM AEST
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simply beautiful. i really liked this.
Arden




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