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Array ( [sid] => 39944 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sweet Revenge [time] => 2004-03-23 17:42:55 [hometext] => 'shlum' its a new word i came up w/h hahaha funny eh? [bodytext] => As I lay on my bed,
While slitting my wrists,
I think about killing someone,
I think about killing you,

Do you know all the pain you've caused me,
Probably don't,
All caught up in your perfect world,
To see a poor shlum walking the streets,

You don't care,
No one dose,
In fact I don't mind,
It helps my mind fill with these awfull thoughts,

Thoughts of more pain for others,
For people like you,
To popular for your own good,
Your to cool for my likeing,

But you don't care,
Not about me or my friends,
So here I am,
Filled with pain and regret,

O' well tomorows another day,
Another day to be filled with hurt,
I wont,
I can't,

Can't take this no more,
Run away find somewhere to hide,
Rather than see your accusing face,
Looking down at me in disgust as you do everyday,

So what if i love him,
What do you care,
You hate him too,
But why do you need to start things like this,

Spead rumors to hurt me,
Don't you know that your hurting him too,
O' wait yes you do cause that was what made you start this,
Only to see both of us suffer,

So no more do I care,
And neither will him,
I wont shed no tear,
while watching your life slip away befour my eyes,

Revenge is sweet

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Sweet Revenge

Contributed by TwEeK on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:42:55 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

As I lay on my bed,
While slitting my wrists,
I think about killing someone,
I think about killing you,

Do you know all the pain you've caused me,
Probably don't,
All caught up in your perfect world,
To see a poor shlum walking the streets,

You don't care,
No one dose,
In fact I don't mind,
It helps my mind fill with these awfull thoughts,

Thoughts of more pain for others,
For people like you,
To popular for your own good,
Your to cool for my likeing,

But you don't care,
Not about me or my friends,
So here I am,
Filled with pain and regret,

O' well tomorows another day,
Another day to be filled with hurt,
I wont,
I can't,

Can't take this no more,
Run away find somewhere to hide,
Rather than see your accusing face,
Looking down at me in disgust as you do everyday,

So what if i love him,
What do you care,
You hate him too,
But why do you need to start things like this,

Spead rumors to hurt me,
Don't you know that your hurting him too,
O' wait yes you do cause that was what made you start this,
Only to see both of us suffer,

So no more do I care,
And neither will him,
I wont shed no tear,
while watching your life slip away befour my eyes,

Revenge is sweet

Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-03-23 17:42:55]
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Re: Sweet Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:49:47 PM AEST
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oi vey, slitting wrists isn't the rvenge you think... but when you're dark and sadistic i guess it seems different. good write though! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Sweet Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 07:18:33 PM AEST
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Why in the world would anyone slit their OWN wrist to get revenge on someone else?? And why do you care what other people think? What you should care about is what you think of yourself and your friends. No worry about what a bunch of thoughtless nitwits would think.

Rita

Re: Sweet Revenge (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 09:49:48 PM AEST
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Good Write, i know what pain people can cause. It makes you feel like crap...and what you do comes from these feelings. People can be stupid, just try to ignore them. Life will be better in the long run.

Re: Sweet Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 10:46:24 PM AEST
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A dark and twisted poem. With a pint of sadism, good combination.

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