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Array ( [sid] => 39896 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love sail [time] => 2004-03-23 09:50:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Eyes watery they are
nice all my thoughts wear
afloat they sail in my heart
joy of singing birds chirping
ploy of strong waves coming
afloat they sail in my heart
I can feel it
I can hear it
I can see it
sail-sail-sail-sail-sail-sail
on an ocean of love I sail
gentle waves of peace I feel
shaping my heart to a love-steel
I can feel it
I can hear it
I can see it
sun bright she shines
fun here wines and dines
within the bricks of my heart
there I see fairy boats assail
here where peace and joy hail
within the bricks of my heart
I can feel it
I can hear it
I can see it
all within the bricks of my heart.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 2 [informant] => uchendu [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 21 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Love sail

Contributed by uchendu on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 09:50:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Eyes watery they are
nice all my thoughts wear
afloat they sail in my heart
joy of singing birds chirping
ploy of strong waves coming
afloat they sail in my heart
I can feel it
I can hear it
I can see it
sail-sail-sail-sail-sail-sail
on an ocean of love I sail
gentle waves of peace I feel
shaping my heart to a love-steel
I can feel it
I can hear it
I can see it
sun bright she shines
fun here wines and dines
within the bricks of my heart
there I see fairy boats assail
here where peace and joy hail
within the bricks of my heart
I can feel it
I can hear it
I can see it
all within the bricks of my heart.

Copyright © uchendu ... [ 2004-03-23 09:50:44]
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Re: Love sail (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:17:42 PM AEST
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almost sounds like you're going to break down and cry at any given moment, pretty writing... ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Love sail (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 09:48:52 AM AEST
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im must say this is quite nice, it is like you are waiting for love to come to you..kinda sad in away to me for some reason..i guess i love that i can feel the emotion of the w ait...i give this a 5 i love it.........great job my friend tell me what inspired it.....desire

Re: Love sail (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:11:36 PM AEST
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Hey handsome,
Very good write aand I'm ssure she's happy that u feel it and can see it.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

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