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with this peace I found
Everytime I feel secure a voice comes home
And tell me of all the alterations
in the security I found
So everytime I feel secure
I find myself alone
Trying to nail myself to the wall
But knowing it's for me and no good at all

So in this peace I believe
I feel it's nothing more than a need
I need to relax I say
But the calm notion of this does not help me
For I know I'm still not okay

Personally I think
I would be better off dead
Everytime that voice comes home
And I still hear what it said
Trying to better myself and I'm alone
She's trying to nail me to the wall
But she knows it's for me and no good at all

And the things she will do
It's for the need and feel of you
So I say try to relax
But this calm notion is far from here
And I know I'm still not okay

So personally I tried And try
Knowing true peace will come when I die
And for all the alterations I am fine
Cause I know I am me and I am mine

So if peace, of peace,
I'm nothing more than a piece
And I know when I die
That voice will cease [comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 32 [informant] => rhei76 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

MOTHER GIVE ME MY MEDICINE TO MAKE ME FEEL LIKE A TALL TREE

Contributed by rhei76 on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:20:31 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Personally I don't know how to deal
with this peace I found
Everytime I feel secure a voice comes home
And tell me of all the alterations
in the security I found
So everytime I feel secure
I find myself alone
Trying to nail myself to the wall
But knowing it's for me and no good at all

So in this peace I believe
I feel it's nothing more than a need
I need to relax I say
But the calm notion of this does not help me
For I know I'm still not okay

Personally I think
I would be better off dead
Everytime that voice comes home
And I still hear what it said
Trying to better myself and I'm alone
She's trying to nail me to the wall
But she knows it's for me and no good at all

And the things she will do
It's for the need and feel of you
So I say try to relax
But this calm notion is far from here
And I know I'm still not okay

So personally I tried And try
Knowing true peace will come when I die
And for all the alterations I am fine
Cause I know I am me and I am mine

So if peace, of peace,
I'm nothing more than a piece
And I know when I die
That voice will cease

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2004-03-23 05:20:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: MOTHER GIVE ME MY MEDICINE TO MAKE ME FEEL LIKE A TALL TREE (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:17:41 PM AEST
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ooo, i like filter... lol, good thoughts on peace. i love this write, good stuff! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: MOTHER GIVE ME MY MEDICINE TO MAKE ME FEEL LIKE A TALL TREE (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 06:48:13 AM AEST
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Wonderful musing, sad and deep.
Peace to you!
Hur

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