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[aid] => mick
[title] => Help Me
[time] => 2004-03-23 02:45:53
[hometext] => I dont know if this poem makes since to anyone but me but uh I wrote it anyways.. please comment.. Id apprecciate it..
[bodytext] => No body notices
The good things I do
They point out the bad
The things I did to you
When I stole bleh bleh
Or smoked blah blah
I want to change
Where is that "Aha!" ?
You yell at me and say I should
But dont give me the chance
I dont know how you think I can get this stance
I really do want it
But you dont seem to see
In order for me to change
It takes more than the help of me
You need to guide me
Help me through all this
Im not as strong as you think
ignorance isnt always bliss
[comments] => 8
[counter] => 270
[topic] => 61
[informant] => God-Hates-Me
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[score] => 21
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => selfstruggles
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Help Me
Contributed by
God-Hates-Me
on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:45:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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No body notices
The good things I do
They point out the bad
The things I did to you
When I stole bleh bleh
Or smoked blah blah
I want to change
Where is that "Aha!" ?
You yell at me and say I should
But dont give me the chance
I dont know how you think I can get this stance
I really do want it
But you dont seem to see
In order for me to change
It takes more than the help of me
You need to guide me
Help me through all this
Im not as strong as you think
ignorance isnt always bliss
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2004-03-23 02:45:53]
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Re: Help Me
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 03:24:09 AM AEST
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Gwen' .....................God hates me too.
You can get the sort of help you seek in a small community but not in present day western society.
Everyone is too busy with their own problems
(as you are) to be bothered about anyone else There are plenty of "guidance" clinics on specific problems. Worth a try.
Without knowing a great deal more about you it is difficult to offer advice but the poem paints a vivid picture of a "ship" in distress sending out S.O.S. signals. (Good write)
bob |
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Re: Help Me
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by badlander on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 03:46:51 AM AEST
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| I get it, makes sense to me. Good write. Don't give up.Dig down deep and do it for yourself. |
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Re: Help Me
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 03:52:36 AM AEST
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gOD, I believe it made sense. understanding
by a bipolar.
like some suc said- time is the answer to the problem.
plus, if you can see it, you are doing better than most.
not to mention endurance sometime is a better pace than strength, and obviously you are stronger than you think.
as well communication is a stepping stone.
read or have the other read these thoughts.
it's a very truthfull presentation.
baby steps sometimes help to keep you from falling.
i wish the best for you.
-rhei76- |
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Re: Help Me
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:12:12 AM AEST
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gOD, thank you, you got me all ralled up,
you got me thinking in a frame that i love. |
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Re: Help Me
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:53:29 AM AEST
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| You ask for help? Are you in a wheel chair. are you mentally deficient or do you suffer from some incurable disease? Why not try counting your blessings. You can write therefore you have eyes to see. Imagine what it would be like to be blind or deaf. crippled with arthritis or some other disease. Learn to look on the bright side. smile for a change you are much better off than you think. that is my help from bernard. |
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Re: Help Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:12:26 PM AEST
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Gwen, I know you don't know me, but let me say to you from experience. People always talk about the bad stuff because it is more interesting and keeps the fires of gossip going which keeps them happy because they have sad empty lives. In spite of what people say, do what you know is right. Eventually they will forget all the past stuff and move on to someone else. It is like all the bad you hear about in the news, but they never tell us about all the good that teens do. I know there are more good teens than bad, but the good don't make the news, they make life and a difference in our world. But they are too busy worrying about what their world needs than to worry about what people say. People will talk no matter what and as Bob said, the past is past and you can't change it. The only change you can effect is your future. You are ready for the change, so just do it! Let me know how you are doing and don't make the mistake of expecting overnight miracles. We all are our own worst enemies when it comes to setting goals for ourselves. Start out setting goals you can meet. Not setting goals so high you can't reach them. Don't set yourself up for failure right off. So to be so long winded, but I do care.
Rita |
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Re: Help Me
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 09:00:22 PM AEST
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Time is a great medicine, but I also know what it's like to be given a 2nd chance with a clean slate. I'm not sure who you're addressing in this piece? A parent? A friend? God? Maybe all of the above?
Stitch |
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Re: Help Me
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by Sexygirl on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 09:38:43 PM AEST
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| This so overlooked everyday...It really hurts when your trying to make the difference, not only in your life but others too...Well done....take care.. |
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