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Array ( [sid] => 39838 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Out my Door [time] => 2004-03-22 21:50:42 [hometext] => Nothin' like a bit of Rock and Roll! [bodytext] => You said I lost you today
Cause baby you won’t stay
In my life of broken smiles
And shattered dreams.
You go wrap him in your love
And in a swirl of misery
I hear you say…

"Don’t ring me anymore
Don’t want to talk to you no more
And if you see me walkin’
On the street…
Don’t love me anymore
I won’t love you anyway!"

Baby, baby! You make
My knees go weak!

Oh she’s gone now
Yeah she’s gone now
I’ll miss her sweet love
And I’ll miss her sweet lips
Of honey gold.

Oh baby
I miss your lovin’ ways
As the hours turn into days
We were the right thing
For us I just knew…
But your gone forever more
As you walked
Right out my door
I heard you say…

"Don’t ring me anymore
Don’t want to talk to you no more
And if you see me, walkin’
On the street…
Don’t love me any more
I won’t love you anyway!"

Baby, baby! You make
My knees go weak.
That’s for sure…

You’ve gone and walked
right out my door
That’s for sure!
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 34 [informant] => twinkletoes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Out my Door

Contributed by twinkletoes on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 09:50:42 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



You said I lost you today
Cause baby you won’t stay
In my life of broken smiles
And shattered dreams.
You go wrap him in your love
And in a swirl of misery
I hear you say…

"Don’t ring me anymore
Don’t want to talk to you no more
And if you see me walkin’
On the street…
Don’t love me anymore
I won’t love you anyway!"

Baby, baby! You make
My knees go weak!

Oh she’s gone now
Yeah she’s gone now
I’ll miss her sweet love
And I’ll miss her sweet lips
Of honey gold.

Oh baby
I miss your lovin’ ways
As the hours turn into days
We were the right thing
For us I just knew…
But your gone forever more
As you walked
Right out my door
I heard you say…

"Don’t ring me anymore
Don’t want to talk to you no more
And if you see me, walkin’
On the street…
Don’t love me any more
I won’t love you anyway!"

Baby, baby! You make
My knees go weak.
That’s for sure…

You’ve gone and walked
right out my door
That’s for sure!




Copyright © twinkletoes ... [ 2004-03-22 21:50:42]
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Re: Out my Door (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_of_anger on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 10:00:57 PM AEST
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Yes, Rock is good. Nice song


Re: Out my Door (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:27:32 AM AEST
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Very nice song, done in the style of ye olde rock and roll times. Well done!


Re: Out my Door (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:24:51 AM AEST
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A talented write....venkat


Re: Out my Door (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:44:35 PM AEST
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Hey those ol' twinkletoes were tappin' when you wrote this one! i can hear the double bass thumping from here! good song love to hear it performed.

wildejohnny




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