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Array ( [sid] => 39832 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heir To The Throne (Pt.3) [time] => 2004-03-22 21:17:38 [hometext] => I know it's taken me a long time to get this in, but I'm trying to figure out how to end it. I am trying to work on part 4. [bodytext] => The Princess gazed out the window
as she watched her father leave,
he had all his armour on
ready for a battle.
She watched him as he mounted
his tall black stallion,
she had the feeling that this
will be the last time she
sees her father alive.
The Princess saw her father
ride off across the land,
he never gave his daughter
the final farewell before he left.
She paced the floors,
she walked the long hallway,
went downstairs and stood outside.
The sun's rays beamed brightly
down upon her as she wept,
she didn't know what else to do.
Meanwhile, into town where
the Princesses father finally arrived,
he had noble knights watching
his evil brother's every move,
this was the day, the King,
was going to avenge his wife's murder.
The noble knights cornered
the King's brother,
the clanking of the metal
from the swords,
rang out through the town.
The King's noble knights and
the King's brothers knights,
battled to their deaths.
The air cleared and the
only two men left standing,
were the King and his brother.
Finally,
after all these years,
they met face to face.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
Mar.10/2004 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 42 [informant] => Cynthia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mythology )
Heir To The Throne (Pt.3)

Contributed by Cynthia on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 09:17:38 PM in AEST
Topic: mythology



The Princess gazed out the window
as she watched her father leave,
he had all his armour on
ready for a battle.
She watched him as he mounted
his tall black stallion,
she had the feeling that this
will be the last time she
sees her father alive.
The Princess saw her father
ride off across the land,
he never gave his daughter
the final farewell before he left.
She paced the floors,
she walked the long hallway,
went downstairs and stood outside.
The sun's rays beamed brightly
down upon her as she wept,
she didn't know what else to do.
Meanwhile, into town where
the Princesses father finally arrived,
he had noble knights watching
his evil brother's every move,
this was the day, the King,
was going to avenge his wife's murder.
The noble knights cornered
the King's brother,
the clanking of the metal
from the swords,
rang out through the town.
The King's noble knights and
the King's brothers knights,
battled to their deaths.
The air cleared and the
only two men left standing,
were the King and his brother.
Finally,
after all these years,
they met face to face.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
Mar.10/2004




Copyright © Cynthia ... [ 2004-03-22 21:17:38]
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Re: Heir To The Throne (Pt.3) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 12:49:05 AM AEST
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I had been wondering when pt.3 would appear. Now I am biting my nails. If all goes the way the world should be, the good will win, but we all know life doesn't always work that way. Hmmmmmmm, now I just have to sit and wait again. [tap tap tapping of impatient nails on the desk]

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Rita


Re: Heir To The Throne (Pt.3) (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:22:49 PM AEST
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ooo, i like i like!! good storytelling, i love it! hope to read the other part coming in... ;0)
~Remy~


Re: Heir To The Throne (Pt.3) (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:25:53 AM AEST
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IT GETS MORE & MORE INTRIGUING & MAKES ME CRAZY TO WAIT FOR THE END!
VERY WELL WRITTEN!!
LOL-DAN!!!




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