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Array ( [sid] => 3983 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can YOU Feel What I’m Trying to Write? [time] => 2002-09-18 16:34:44 [hometext] => from old site...

I think myself foolish for believing someone so special as him could like me, because he is older, more mature. Yet I cannot help my heart and soul, for I care so much about him. It’s difficult to admit how I feel, for he’s sought after often. I am only who I am, plain and unsophisticated. He’s attractive, caring, giving. So why do I feel so about him? I know I sense something from him, but wish I knew if I had what it took for him to make a move. I am ole fashion, with morals and values. I feel if the man will finally give in to his feelings, then I hope He will, I will gladly accept him into my life, for he is already in my heart. (If only I had the moxy to let him read this…)

[bodytext] => I have something to say
It’s been waiting to come out for some time
I am at a loss of words, to speak openly at bay
I get tongue tied, because it’s you I like
Perhaps foolish for how I feel, my emotions chime
So much older then I, yet age is an endless pike
I can sense you cannot express yourself well
Or speak the way you feel, nervous to tell
I care about you, want to get to know you more
Yet, am I a gal you want to have at your hearts core?
I wish I knew if I have what you wanted
So if I did, maybe I could speak clearly, undaunted
If only work wasn’t just the place to see daily
You have so many admirers call, a wailing!
I have more interests in you, then just the physical
Those admirers may use you for that reason
But I feel much deeper, loyal always, never treason
A cut above the rest I am, sometimes whimsical!
The fact I can feel as if we knew a life before
Although that’s not so, its as if dimension opened a door
I really don’t know you well,
So why do I feel this endless, loving spell?
I wish you would come forward and let me know
If you too, feel what I feel, then it should grow
We have so much respect in our friendship for sure
It would not be ruined if you and I let it mature
IF all of this is my misunderstanding
Then please forgive a foolish gal of her heart woolgathering!
I have written my say for now
Love knows no boundaries; always it will bow

Amber Rose Yeager – April 28, 2002

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 33 [informant] => rose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
Can YOU Feel What I’m Trying to Write?

Contributed by rose on Wednesday, 18th September 2002 @ 04:34:44 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



I have something to say
It’s been waiting to come out for some time
I am at a loss of words, to speak openly at bay
I get tongue tied, because it’s you I like
Perhaps foolish for how I feel, my emotions chime
So much older then I, yet age is an endless pike
I can sense you cannot express yourself well
Or speak the way you feel, nervous to tell
I care about you, want to get to know you more
Yet, am I a gal you want to have at your hearts core?
I wish I knew if I have what you wanted
So if I did, maybe I could speak clearly, undaunted
If only work wasn’t just the place to see daily
You have so many admirers call, a wailing!
I have more interests in you, then just the physical
Those admirers may use you for that reason
But I feel much deeper, loyal always, never treason
A cut above the rest I am, sometimes whimsical!
The fact I can feel as if we knew a life before
Although that’s not so, its as if dimension opened a door
I really don’t know you well,
So why do I feel this endless, loving spell?
I wish you would come forward and let me know
If you too, feel what I feel, then it should grow
We have so much respect in our friendship for sure
It would not be ruined if you and I let it mature
IF all of this is my misunderstanding
Then please forgive a foolish gal of her heart woolgathering!
I have written my say for now
Love knows no boundaries; always it will bow

Amber Rose Yeager – April 28, 2002





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Re: Can YOU Feel What I’m Trying to Write? (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 01:48:22 AM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel. I hope you find your way..


Re: Can YOU Feel What I’m Trying to Write? (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 09:26:00 AM AEST
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This was written in the Spring. I have only just two months ago, let him know how I feel. ever since then, I have been nothing short of feeling as I should have never done this. I never approached a man in my life, let alone, even write love poems. Nothing said, except, these three words, when I asked him what he had to say to my thoughts, and he said, "NOthing to say " He couldn't even look me in the eyes, even look at me at all!!! and I also found my last write to him in the trash in tiny pieces the next morning. I only wrote him twice, that was it. just tells me I am never going to do that again, and boy, what a way to hurt someone, at least this is the way I took it.... of course, men and woman think so differently..... but this really hurt, it would have been nice to have him at least tell me he was not into dating, or even with someone, or something to suggest he wasn't interested, although that wasn't what I got, but well, guess it was all in my stupid head.
I wish you better luck, for I sure have not done well in this area.
Always, Amber Rose :)


Re: Can YOU Feel What I’m Trying to Write? (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 12:55:24 AM AEST
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Beautiful write Rose,all I can say is I know what you are going through.Don't give up..All I can say,
PumpkinPie




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