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Covered in the innocence and beauty of his youth
Laying in his grave, writing short tomorrows
His heart is torn, hes so alone, silent tears for sorrows

All around the earth erupts, but all he hears is her
A gentle voice, the softest touch, the world is just a blur
Surrounding him deaths embrace, hes cold as ice and snow
Yet his heart, its final beat, emits a warming glow

Shrouded by the fears of death, this warrior forgets
Everything that was his life, Love, the pain, regrets
But as he dies one thought remains, one of love so true
Captivated by this thought, his loved ones now in view

Nows hes left, hes nothing but, a statistic for the war
He died in arms against a plague, to try and save this tor
A plaque was made for this man, its sits where hes lost life
In simple words, for everyone, the firefighters strife

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September Warriors

Contributed by forever_lonely on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 08:41:31 PM in AEST
Topic: Tributes

Deep within the battlefield lays a warrior of truth
Covered in the innocence and beauty of his youth
Laying in his grave, writing short tomorrows
His heart is torn, hes so alone, silent tears for sorrows

All around the earth erupts, but all he hears is her
A gentle voice, the softest touch, the world is just a blur
Surrounding him deaths embrace, hes cold as ice and snow
Yet his heart, its final beat, emits a warming glow

Shrouded by the fears of death, this warrior forgets
Everything that was his life, Love, the pain, regrets
But as he dies one thought remains, one of love so true
Captivated by this thought, his loved ones now in view

Nows hes left, hes nothing but, a statistic for the war
He died in arms against a plague, to try and save this tor
A plaque was made for this man, its sits where hes lost life
In simple words, for everyone, the firefighters strife

Copyright © forever_lonely ... [ 2004-03-22 20:41:31]
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Re: September Warriors (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 08:59:06 PM AEST
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It isnt corny at all my friend, it's a beautifully written work of art . Yours is a poets mind.

very well done
Barkeep, a drink for a real poet

Larry

Re: September Warriors (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 09:04:13 PM AEST
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I second Larry. An essentially fine piece of poetry you've written here, about a world-changing tragedy. R&R is beyond reproach. 5 stars.

Re: September Warriors (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:27:55 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful, i dont believe firefighters are honored often enough, well done luke! hugs n' love nessa

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Re: September Warriors (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:52:05 AM AEST
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I love it,it's beautifully written.
your a true poet. :)

Re: September Warriors (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:23:03 AM AEST
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A very inspiring poem that you should be proud of writing ... your talent shines ... Jan

Re: September Warriors (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 06:54:49 AM AEST
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Corny?!?!? Are you mad?!?!?

This is by far the most artistic and heartfelt write of this nature i've seen. This is good--really good. Gotta go with Neptunes First on this one, five stars for sure!

Truly,
-V.S.

Re: September Warriors (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 03:55:48 PM AEST
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what a wonderful tribute. :) thank you for sharing this masterpiece.

Lindsey

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