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Array ( [sid] => 39819 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Angels Tears [time] => 2004-03-22 20:14:37 [hometext] => 'How can I give you something that I just haven't got?' [bodytext] => She reaches for me
and gently caresses.
Tears streaming down
her lovely face as she
watches me bleed in pain.
She tries to tell me that
everything will be alright,
but I can't hear a word
when I'm screaming all over.

An angel can only save you
if you will take their hand.

Here I lay in pain screaming
in the arms of a weeping angel.
And I can tell my pain is
hurting her too but I can't stop.
Pain begets pain in amplification.
Pain can grow and spread even
in the arms of an angel.

And I can tell I'm tearing
this angel apart just like I was.

I've cried myself to sleep as
she kissed my face gently.
A friend watched over me
while I was dying inside.
She kept saying it'll be alright
and that she'd hold my hand
through the cold dark nights in life.
She let's me sleep as she carries me home.

Raven's Sin [comments] => 7 [counter] => 295 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cobalt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Angels Tears

Contributed by Cobalt on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 08:14:37 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

She reaches for me
and gently caresses.
Tears streaming down
her lovely face as she
watches me bleed in pain.
She tries to tell me that
everything will be alright,
but I can't hear a word
when I'm screaming all over.

An angel can only save you
if you will take their hand.

Here I lay in pain screaming
in the arms of a weeping angel.
And I can tell my pain is
hurting her too but I can't stop.
Pain begets pain in amplification.
Pain can grow and spread even
in the arms of an angel.

And I can tell I'm tearing
this angel apart just like I was.

I've cried myself to sleep as
she kissed my face gently.
A friend watched over me
while I was dying inside.
She kept saying it'll be alright
and that she'd hold my hand
through the cold dark nights in life.
She let's me sleep as she carries me home.

Raven's Sin

Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2004-03-22 20:14:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Angels Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 08:18:23 PM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes. Sad, tender and filled with pain. It was beautiful to read. Kie

Re: Angels Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 08:25:37 PM AEST
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Awww..such a tender write..... really touching.... You should give her a chance, Jeff.....
Jenni

Re: Angels Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 09:22:42 PM AEST
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This is such a beautiful write. It's so sad. *S* Cynthia

Re: Angels Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 10:03:30 PM AEST
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Good one Raven

Whisper

Re: Angels Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 10:19:16 PM AEST
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Sorry, But This Made Me Cry
As I Was Reading It.
VERY Touching VERY Sad
But Yet A Great Write...
,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,

Re: Angels Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 10:33:35 PM AEST
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I did cry too! this was a touching write & well done! Christina

Re: Angels Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 01:35:00 AM AEST
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Well done, my friend. There's honesty in here, that I think many of us can identify with, on different levels.
Very well-portrayed.
Andrew

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